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Topic: Christmas Legend
Differentkindofwench's photo
Thu 12/10/09 06:43 AM
Through a howling forest,
on a freezing winter night,
reindeer flounder in the snow.

Santa and his presents
are burrowed down deep
stuck in weather that’s 40 below.

Mistletoe whips by
barely missing their eyes,
as it’s driven by harsh screaming winds.

Oh woe unto them,
it’s nearly Christmas again
and they’re blocked by a downed gingerbread tree!

Icicles glare
with frozen faced stares.
No help will they offer this man.

Santa begins dreaming
of hot cocoa that’s steaming
imagining the warmth in his hands.

(Now, you know he has magic,
so this story’s not tragic,
at least, that’s what I was told.)

As the tree catches that warm cocoa scent,
it stands straight as a chimney
and dances a tree version lindy,

clearing a path
through this rough
wonderland.

Yes, this Holiday is saved!
The man, reindeer, and sleigh
now fly every year through the sky.

Many legends and stories
tell Santa’s tribulations and glories
and this is but one of those tales.

The gingerbread tree,
I most definitively can see,
sparks more than a smidgen of doubts --

Yet, I ask you,
where else would we find wood
for that gingerbread house?

MzEm's photo
Thu 12/10/09 09:48 AM
loving this DKW! flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Thu 12/10/09 11:31 AM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
l.t.n.s. wenchlady

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Sat 12/12/09 06:06 PM
noway So THATS what happen to Santa,,,,,,,WOW,,,,,who would have guess it,,,,,wink, COOL write, sparks glowing white,,,lol

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Sat 12/12/09 06:35 PM
Edited by Ainjel on Sat 12/12/09 06:37 PM
I love how most of you have a beautiful white Christmas while here in NZ we suffer a hot and humid one...Nice write...





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Sat 12/12/09 06:39 PM

I love how most of you have a beautiful white Christmas while here in NZ we suffer a hot and humid one...Nice write...





wow,,,,Can I move THERE?????


Wet snow,,,,,warm ice,,,,,hot days,,,,,,no- wind-chill factors below
fifty,,,,,,,YES,,,,YES,,,,YES,,,,,,,:wink: laugh laugh laugh

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Sat 12/12/09 07:07 PM


I love how most of you have a beautiful white Christmas while here in NZ we suffer a hot and humid one...Nice write...





wow,,,,Can I move THERE?????


Wet snow,,,,,warm ice,,,,,hot days,,,,,,no- wind-chill factors below
fifty,,,,,,,YES,,,,YES,,,,YES,,,,,,,:wink: laugh laugh laugh


Sounds so much nicer then 91.4 farenheit, 100% humidity, warm wind factor, oh and did I mention the bloody flies...?.... :laughing: Poor old santa sweats up a storm coming to this part of the world once a year... :laughing:

kc0003's photo
Sat 12/12/09 07:16 PM



I love how most of you have a beautiful white Christmas while here in NZ we suffer a hot and humid one...Nice write...





wow,,,,Can I move THERE?????


Wet snow,,,,,warm ice,,,,,hot days,,,,,,no- wind-chill factors below
fifty,,,,,,,YES,,,,YES,,,,YES,,,,,,,:wink: laugh laugh laugh


Sounds so much nicer then 91.4 farenheit, 100% humidity, warm wind factor, oh and did I mention the bloody flies...?.... :laughing: Poor old santa sweats up a storm coming to this part of the world once a year... :laughing:





omg...i would so trade with you ...for a year or two anyway

jimz's photo
Sat 12/12/09 09:06 PM
nice

AZKait's photo
Sat 12/12/09 10:18 PM
I love your imagination
flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 12/14/09 08:59 PM

loving this DKW! flowerforyou
Thank you and a very Merry Christmas to you and your's Ms.Em!

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Mon 12/14/09 09:01 PM
A wonderful and witty piece perfect for the holidays! Ho Ho Ho darlin Wench! :heart:

Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 12/14/09 09:02 PM

:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
l.t.n.s. wenchlady
I'm a-feared to ask, unless of course n.s. stands for new side, perhaps? Then again, you know me well enough, the "n" could stand for nnnn-nice (in which case, I profusely appreciate your NOT spelling that out- Egad, my rep would be in shambles, man!) LMAO (maniacally of course)

Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 12/14/09 09:03 PM

noway So THATS what happen to Santa,,,,,,,WOW,,,,,who would have guess it,,,,,wink, COOL write, sparks glowing white,,,lol
I made it steaming (cocoa, duh) just for you, Budd, lol. Merry Christmas hope all is going smoothly.

Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 12/14/09 09:06 PM

I love how most of you have a beautiful white Christmas while here in NZ we suffer a hot and humid one...Nice write...





I feel ya - Phoenix, Arizona is not in the snow zone either, but it has been unusually cold, so my sand snake may get a bit of a shocker - it won't last long, but whoa it'd definitely be different, lol! Nice sleigh btw! Oh and Happy Holidays!

Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 12/14/09 09:07 PM

nice
Hello and Merry Christmas, you!

Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 12/14/09 09:11 PM

A wonderful and witty piece perfect for the holidays! Ho Ho Ho darlin Wench! :heart:
Not till I get paid, I'm not, ohhhhh The Laughter kind, oops


WonderWizzzz!!!!Gosh it's good to see ya.

Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 12/14/09 09:20 PM

I love your imagination
flowerforyou
Thank you, Kate. The beauty of remaining a "toysRus kid". I was given a challenge to write with at least 10 of 20 Christmas words from a word bank. Oh and no cliche' (I don't think I stayed away from cliche' but I managed to use 17 of the 20 in an unexpected way, but it still had the Christmas-y theme. I'm still going to revamp this a couple more times, just not sure how, lol. I kind of like the fact that the gingerbread tree blocks the rhythm of the poem as much as it does the sleigh, muahhhhaahaaa!

Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 12/14/09 09:22 PM
P.S. Kace, have a very merry wonderful Holiday!

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Mon 12/14/09 09:26 PM
enlightening......much enjoyed

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