Topic: SOLITUDE PART 1
FARMBOY01's photo
Wed 06/06/07 04:38 PM
Here I sit
Alone and cold
I start to wounder
As day turns to night
Will I ever find true loves kiss
Or will I be lost and lonley
Destin for a life of salitude
I wish for morning light
To bering me true loves kiss
As mornig light appers
I find myself on my knees beging please
Woundering why it was me
To be polaced in a life of salitude
So lonley and scared
I begin to fear I will die
Lonley and scared
Never knowing what true love was
Overwelmed with fear
Never knowing what true love was
Or weather I will die
Alone and scared
Haveing and looseing true love
Than the Reeper himself
So were was true loves firs kiss
Will I die alone
Never knowing what true love was
Am I destin for solitude alone
With true love never showing
I know now I am destin to die alone
Never knowing true loves kiss

music_man's photo
Wed 06/06/07 06:41 PM
Wow....... Deep..Deep..wow..Good poem

Donnafisher's photo
Wed 06/06/07 07:05 PM
I agree very wow and deep

no photo
Mon 06/11/07 09:00 AM
very deep indeed