Topic: In A Mouters Eye
FARMBOY01's photo
Wed 06/06/07 10:01 AM
So pure and True
Small and fragile
So helpless and weak
So small but yet so big

All is true
She would die
To bring him all
She would give all
to keep her alive
So full of life
Pure and sweet
Helpless and weak

In need of a mothers love
So pure and true
Full of hope and happienes
Love and joy
As we grow to show the old
In the mothers eye
We are still
So fragile and small
Helpless and weak
In a mouthers eye
We will be
Our mothers first true love

LAMom's photo
Wed 06/06/07 10:09 AM
Beautiful flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 06/06/07 11:12 AM
Farmboy,

You hit a nerve on this one son, is that not what poetry is intended for
- an emotional response of some type - keep goin, broaden it out a
little bit, but keep goin - sibling rivalry ya know.

no photo
Mon 06/11/07 09:06 AM
flowerforyou ur work is amazing