Topic: Hide And Seek (Tetractys)
HuckleberryFinn's photo
Wed 11/18/09 11:26 PM
Hide And Seek (Tetractys)

search
your heart
deep inside
now you can smile
for I have found the perfect place to hide...


Tetractys should express a complete thought, profound
or comic, witty or wise using 20 syllables. They can be
written with more than one verse but each subsequent
verse must invert the syllable count. There is no limit
to the number of verses. The structure is:

line 1 - 1 syllable
line 2 - 2 syllables
line 3 - 3 syllables
line 4 - 4 syllables
line 5 - 10 syllables

no photo
Thu 11/19/09 12:40 AM
noway ok,,as my brain shut down an hour ago,,,YOU GIVE ME THIS,,,,NOW,,,,nooooooooooooooooooooooo,
I will look and think it better,,,aftersleep man,,,Goodnight and be safe,,drinker

no photo
Fri 11/20/09 06:45 PM
still tryin' the sestina thing....
teasingbrunette can only do so much..smiling...like the format.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 11/22/09 11:22 AM

Hide And Seek (Tetractys)

search
your heart
deep inside
now you can smile
for I have found the perfect place to hide...


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