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I look in the mirror
at the reflection I see and all that stares back is a blank expression of me. The sadness and trials that life left behind has left little room for a reflection of smiles. I look deep within to find something to grasp wondering when it will be safe to remove my outer mask. The only happiness I find to recall Is being a Mother, the best blessing of all. I close my eyes in hopes to see a reflection within of the true me. 11-15-2009 |
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Excellent imagery. Very evocative. Great job! I thought I'd torture you with one of my own! Ha!
It is silent in the cathedral. The altar shrouded in dust. The pews stretch on forever. Because they must. My heart is the bell in the tower. It used to sing out every hour. But now it is dark and soundless. Because it is. It is. These stained glass windows Used to reverberate with love. Souls would fuse together And escape through cracks above. While copper pipes Burst forth with glory, And spirits wronged Would tell their story. Then all was quiet. No penitence to golden icons made. Christ just hung upon his cross And none were saved. When you left the cathedral of love, God nor Devil spoke from below or above. Dead silence reigned supreme. As it has always been. |
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Excellent imagery. Very evocative. Great job! I thought I'd torture you with one of my own! Ha! It is silent in the cathedral. The altar shrouded in dust. The pews stretch on forever. Because they must. My heart is the bell in the tower. It used to sing out every hour. But now it is dark and soundless. Because it is. It is. These stained glass windows Used to reverberate with love. Souls would fuse together And escape through cracks above. While copper pipes Burst forth with glory, And spirits wronged Would tell their story. Then all was quiet. No penitence to golden icons made. Christ just hung upon his cross And none were saved. When you left the cathedral of love, God nor Devil spoke from below or above. Dead silence reigned supreme. As it has always been. WOW Thats deep. I like it |
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I look in the mirror at the reflection I see and all that stares back is a blank expression of me. The sadness and trials that life left behind has left little room for a reflection of smiles. I look deep within to find something to grasp wondering when it will be safe to remove my outer mask. The only happiness I find to recall Is being a Mother, the best blessing of all. I close my eyes in hopes to see a reflection within of the true me. 11-15-2009 to altered reflections and incipient hope... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UckfZ8rds-g |
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