Topic: ... lost language ...
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Sat 11/14/09 09:14 PM

... lost language ...

there was a time
not long ago
a moon or so
the universe
erupted
and birthed
from her pouting labia
... language ...

ripe with the musk
of do come right in
you are without
condition
quite welcome

that was then
so long ago
an age or so
wee lad
and lass
as thou know

then came the age
the drug of ME
the bonded free
... modern language ...

rank with the smut
of who are you?
do i know you?
you certainly
don't know me!!

where so quickly left?
now mourned
bereft
that ancient
... lost language ...

*and so*

the time is nigh
and drawing near
that final curtain

how will you reflect
when you retrospect
joy or regret?
... your life's language ...

poisoned and vexed
bilious and cleft
imbued in misery
... violent ...
... silent ...

fragrant sweat
perfumed breath
illocution of sweetness
... violet ...
... resonate ...

ancient language
patient language
transparent language
uninhibited language
virtuous language
natural language
spoken language
kinetic language
... lost...

... lost language ...

jimz's photo
Mon 11/16/09 10:16 AM


... lost language ...

there was a time
not long ago
a moon or so
the universe
erupted
and birthed
from her pouting labia
... language ...

ripe with the musk
of do come right in
you are without
condition
quite welcome

that was then
so long ago
an age or so
wee lad
and lass
as thou know

then came the age
the drug of ME
the bonded free
... modern language ...

rank with the smut
of who are you?
do i know you?
you certainly
don't know me!!

where so quickly left?
now mourned
bereft
that ancient
... lost language ...

*and so*

the time is nigh
and drawing near
that final curtain

how will you reflect
when you retrospect
joy or regret?
... your life's language ...

poisoned and vexed
bilious and cleft
imbued in misery
... violent ...
... silent ...

fragrant sweat
perfumed breath
illocution of sweetness
... violet ...
... resonate ...

ancient language
patient language
transparent language
uninhibited language
virtuous language
natural language
spoken language
kinetic language
... lost...

... lost language ...



awesome!!! really enjoy reading your poetry

no photo
Tue 11/17/09 06:01 AM



... lost language ...

there was a time
not long ago
a moon or so
the universe
erupted
and birthed
from her pouting labia
... language ...

ripe with the musk
of do come right in
you are without
condition
quite welcome

that was then
so long ago
an age or so
wee lad
and lass
as thou know

then came the age
the drug of ME
the bonded free
... modern language ...

rank with the smut
of who are you?
do i know you?
you certainly
don't know me!!

where so quickly left?
now mourned
bereft
that ancient
... lost language ...

*and so*

the time is nigh
and drawing near
that final curtain

how will you reflect
when you retrospect
joy or regret?
... your life's language ...

poisoned and vexed
bilious and cleft
imbued in misery
... violent ...
... silent ...

fragrant sweat
perfumed breath
illocution of sweetness
... violet ...
... resonate ...

ancient language
patient language
transparent language
uninhibited language
virtuous language
natural language
spoken language
kinetic language
... lost...

... lost language ...



awesome!!! really enjoy reading your poetry


drinker drinks Thank you my good man... Appreciate the kind words JIMZ...be well.

pkh's photo
Tue 11/17/09 07:14 AM
good write

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Tue 11/17/09 09:42 PM

good write
flowerforyou thank U... PKH..

kc0003's photo
Tue 11/17/09 09:58 PM
nice piece

using language seems not a problem for you. i look forward to more of your work

drinker drinker

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Thu 11/19/09 06:05 PM

nice piece

using language seems not a problem for you. i look forward to more of your work

drinker drinker


drinks drinks ... thanks KC0003... appreciate the compliment :thumbsup: