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Sharris's photo
Tue 11/03/09 08:14 PM
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I found myself
in the midst of a field.
The wild flowers seeded,
where tall grasses kneel.

It was there I hid,
Lying, not seen.
Listening for waves,
that once were green.

Midday had left
Evening beckoned.
Dusk powdered the sky.
And gold, the horizon.

Cool covered me there
as I looked to the clouds.
The top of the tree limbs,
Majestically bowed.

Such a small price
to drink from this cup.
I slept with such hope,
Tis life, looking up.

Raine Les 11/3/2009

no photo
Tue 11/03/09 08:25 PM
I could see and feel this clearly...Wonderful...flowerforyou

MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 11/03/09 11:00 PM

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I found myself
in the midst of a field.
The wild flowers seeded,
where tall grasses kneel.

It was there I hid,
Lying, not seen.
Listening for waves,
that once were green.

Midday had left
Evening beckoned.
Dusk powdered the sky.
And gold, the horizon.

Cool covered me there
as I looked to the clouds.
The top of the tree limbs,
Majestically bowed.

Such a small price
to drink from this cup.
I slept with such hope,
Tis life, looking up.

Raine Les 11/3/2009
flowers

ZPicante's photo
Tue 11/03/09 11:05 PM
I like it.