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I have been through the valley of death.
Knowing pain, suffering, and distress. I have been through the desert of despare. Not knowing why I was there. Walk in my shoes. You have nothing to loose. Take my hand. You will understand. We all have our cross's to bear. We all have our stories to share. Mine is but one, and with riseing of the sun. I pray my journey be done. As I look to the sky. I ask. Why! Oh why! He answers me not. A child forgot. Until I go home. I am alone. |
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I have been through the valley of death. Knowing pain, suffering, and distress. I have been through the desert of despare. Not knowing why I was there. Walk in my shoes. You have nothing to loose. Take my hand. You will understand. We all have our cross's to bear. We all have our stories to share. Mine is but one, and with riseing of the sun. I pray my journey be done. As I look to the sky. I ask. Why! Oh why! He answers me not. A child forgot. Until I go home. I am alone. 
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Edited by
Soulbreeze
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Sun 11/08/09 09:07 PM
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I have been through the valley of death. Knowing pain, suffering, and distress. I have been through the desert of despare. Not knowing why I was there. Walk in my shoes. You have nothing to loose. Take my hand. You will understand. We all have our cross's to bear. We all have our stories to share. Mine is but one, and with riseing of the sun. I pray my journey be done. As I look to the sky. I ask. Why! Oh why! He answers me not. A child forgot. Until I go home. I am alone. well done 
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despare-despair
riseing-rising too good not to clean up, liked how you used the cliche's and made them not seem so cliche......I think even "Poe" would like this |
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