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Not gonna change my profile, because i think its fine, and thats all that matters, but would appreciate your input.
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love on the rocks ain't no surprise,pour me a drink and i'll tell you more lies
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ummmm ok thanks for that,
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20 OUT OF 10
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ty35too appreciate that
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Edited by
Chinen
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Sat 10/31/09 09:20 AM
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Hi. I think the profile is good. Just a few suggestions.
Your headline "Looking for a sweet, decent man" describes what many women are looking for. I think you should come up with something more unique and catchy. You spend more time in your profile saying what kind of man you don't want than anything positive. I think you should cast things in a more positive tone. The creeps and losers that might bother you will do so anyway, no matter what kind of warning you post. So why not concentrate on what you want, instead of what you don't want? A couple of times you use "your" when you mean "you're" |
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hi chinen, ty for your input, you gave some good advice, and i appreciate it, but as far as my spelling goes , if i wanted an english major that would correct everything i write , i would of expressed that in my profile, although it is a kind gesture, to want everyone to punctuate and spell correctly, it is not the most important thing in my world.
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"Ok First of all if your stuck in Africa and need money to get home, pass me by"...oddly enough thats not the first story i heard of that type....
But to me it sounds like an issue,and its never good to hit someone right away with a issue of getting "hosed" or tricked,means bitterness and issues.....im just sayin that you could use a less smack in the face from the get go.After all,i highly doubt that could happen again...(cross fingers) |
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well its happened 3 times so far, so ya kinda get sick of it after awhile.
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Not gonna change my profile, because i think its fine, and thats all that matters, but would appreciate your input. I think the bit about the scammers is alright, but ya might wanna follow that up with a bit about what you ARE seeking and soften the tone a bit. Great pics! |
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