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Topic: I Need To Be Left Alone
tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Wed 10/28/09 10:08 PM
I need to be left alone this is the moment when being mad turning to hurt and sadness. No longer is any glimmer of hope present I wish that you wouldn't of played games I wish you would have told me the truth Instead of trying to 'make it easier' for me. Cause I am a big girl I can handle myself You will never know this moment You will never see my tears You will never understand this feeling. Cause if you did You would have told the truth You wouldn't have played games You would have made it easier for me. Tanya 10/29/2009

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Wed 10/28/09 10:16 PM
Just because I want to be left alone, doesn't mean that I don't want you to comment on the poem!

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 10/28/09 10:25 PM
Just because I want to be left alone, doesn't mean that I don't want you to comment on the poem! OH,,,,,OK,,lol IT ROCKS!!!!! Bad people and bad ideas to just hurt another,,been there on the hurt end and THEY SUCK!!!!! But thanks for getting that and them out,,,maybe others will not trust so easily in their futures,wink.. And a big hug for you,,,,,,,now smile and keep on writing,,,

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Wed 10/28/09 10:28 PM
I think this is a fantastic write...

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Wed 10/28/09 10:28 PM
Just because I want to be left alone, doesn't mean that I don't want you to comment on the poem! OH,,,,,OK,,lol IT ROCKS!!!!! Bad people and bad ideas to just hurt another,,been there on the hurt end and THEY SUCK!!!!! But thanks for getting that and them out,,,maybe others will not trust so easily in their futures,wink.. And a big hug for you,,,,,,,now smile and keep on writing,,, Hey T, Thanks for commenting. Have to trust until you are presented with something not to trust, imo.

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Wed 10/28/09 10:31 PM
I think this is a fantastic write... Thank you! Are you excited that New Moon is less than a month away!?!?!?!

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Wed 10/28/09 10:35 PM
I think this is a fantastic write... Thank you! Are you excited that New Moon is less than a month away!?!?!?! Definitely!! I am not going to try to brave the crowds though ..lol...but it will be fun to see the premiere photos and read the reviews... Will you see it or wait for dvd???

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Wed 10/28/09 10:41 PM
I think this is a fantastic write... Thank you! Are you excited that New Moon is less than a month away!?!?!?! Definitely!! I am not going to try to brave the crowds though ..lol...but it will be fun to see the premiere photos and read the reviews... Will you see it or wait for dvd??? A group of us will be going sometime on Saturday to see it.

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Wed 10/28/09 10:45 PM
How cool and very fun!! I am sure you will enjoy that... and thank you for posting your writing!! I really enjoy reading poetry and I can definitely relate to this piece!! Very well done!

smiless Joined Wed 09/26/07 Posts: 13765	Wed 10/28/09 11:36 PM Edited by smiless on Wed 10/28/09 11:57 PM
I wasn't sure if I should post That was a great poem!

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Thu 10/29/09 04:52 PM
I wasn't sure if I should post That was a great poem! Thanks!

cherie091279 Joined Thu 07/16/09 Posts: 1360	Thu 10/29/09 04:53 PM
Very nice...

Fusion99 Joined Thu 07/09/09 Posts: 927	Fri 10/30/09 07:17 PM


tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Sat 10/31/09 05:36 AM
Thanks for reading, Cherie and Fusion!

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Sat 10/31/09 05:41 AM


tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Sat 10/31/09 05:44 AM
Morning, dollface! Thanks for reading!

carold Joined Sun 03/23/08 Posts: 26747	Sat 10/31/09 08:20 AM
I need to be left alone this is the moment when being mad turning to hurt and sadness. No longer is any glimmer of hope present I wish that you wouldn't of played games I wish you would have told me the truth Instead of trying to 'make it easier' for me. Cause I am a big girl I can handle myself You will never know this moment You will never see my tears You will never understand this feeling. Cause if you did You would have told the truth You wouldn't have played games You would have made it easier for me. Tanya 10/29/2009 Good read for me today. They say no games trust me. The truth is so easier to work through. The hurt from all the lies is not.

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Sat 10/31/09 10:22 AM
I need to be left alone this is the moment when being mad turning to hurt and sadness. No longer is any glimmer of hope present I wish that you wouldn't of played games I wish you would have told me the truth Instead of trying to 'make it easier' for me. Cause I am a big girl I can handle myself You will never know this moment You will never see my tears You will never understand this feeling. Cause if you did You would have told the truth You wouldn't have played games You would have made it easier for me. Tanya 10/29/2009 Good read for me today. They say no games trust me. The truth is so easier to work through. The hurt from all the lies is not. Thanks for reading!