Topic: Infusion of Metaphor
kc0003's photo
Sat 10/24/09 12:24 PM
Edited by kc0003 on Sat 10/24/09 12:35 PM
They passed by again today

This kid and his dog
It is hard to tell which one is in control though

A month ago
My money would have been on the dog

But, as they continue to repeat this daily ritual
The boy is gaining on him

Little

by

little...


Day

by

day…

The-

Alpha
Is
Changing hands


“Heel boy”

“Sit”...”Good boy”

Oh wait,
There goes a cat across the street

Down goes the boy!!!

All bets are
Off...


MzEm's photo
Sat 10/24/09 12:40 PM
LOL

nvkikigirl's photo
Sat 10/24/09 01:00 PM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

no photo
Sat 10/24/09 01:56 PM
laugh

"all bets are off"

the power of the "cat"...so to speak happy

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sat 10/24/09 02:18 PM
Marc wants to know if the dog's name is Marley?

kc0003's photo
Tue 10/27/09 12:19 AM

laugh

"all bets are off"

the power of the "cat"...so to speak happy





yeah something like that......laugh laugh

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 10/27/09 02:35 PM
This reminds me of my friend that has ADHD... we tease him about shiny things controling his life.

Thanks for the chuckle Kevin!!:heart:

EkkoLost's photo
Tue 10/27/09 02:50 PM
Haha,POW!

LoversLyricist's photo
Tue 10/27/09 10:22 PM
I like the power of the cat response, very nice. Good piece, fun read.

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Thu 10/29/09 09:52 PM
I think too much....your opening was quite clever, who is in charge, the dog or the boy, ha ha ha, both are wrong and there's the infusion....tis the feline of course....very nicely done

isn't there a song like that

why must I chase the cat, must be the dog in me....yippie yi a

kc0003's photo
Thu 10/29/09 09:58 PM
thank you for your response...

in this one the boy is life, the leash is structure and control, the dog is man and the "cat"...well, do i even have to explain the cat? lol..or why the dog (man) is chasing it??? laugh laugh laugh