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Shadows .................... Deep in the shadows of my mind Where eternal darkness slumbers, where, frozen, stands the minute hands of time I feel your presence Rain falls from beyond the sky, Rain that mimics the tears of you and i and gradually the flood of memories consumes me Shall I bury what remains? Shall I slowly go insane? Etched in memory written in sand swept in the tide we vanish |
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and then reappear to do it all again...or not
roko |
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Edited by
nvkikigirl
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Mon 10/19/09 08:50 PM
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 i really like this one...great write!!!
"Rain that mimics the tears of you and i"--beautiful!! |
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Loved your write Sara...
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I like your poem very much. I'm Noufel a poet and writer.
Email me if ever you want to discuss poetry and literature. |
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Shadows .................... Deep in the shadows of my mind Where eternal darkness slumbers, where, frozen, stands the minute hands of time I feel your presence Rain falls from beyond the sky, Rain that mimics the tears of you and i and gradually the flood of memories consumes me Shall I bury what remains? Shall I slowly go insane? Etched in memory written in sand swept in the tide we vanish  kewl
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well done....
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cool
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inspired silent music
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