Topic: Inward Fortress
greeneyedlady42's photo
Tue 10/13/09 07:40 PM
Internal waste from exteral sources
Feeling the blows from lifes tangled forces
I settle down to quiet my mind
But there's no solice, no peace can I find...
Where love once dwelled- just empty places
battering rams masked behind the faces
Beauty that shattered eons too soon
My mind echoes franticly to end this gloom
A black hole lies where my heart once beat
I hide in the shadows to find a retreat
In the recess of rock, my fortress I built
While effort lies heaped up -next to my guilt.
The cold damp stone has beccome my home
Hunched over withered, damp and alone;
Inward fortress With walls think and strong
Will I ever find a place to belong?




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Tue 10/13/09 07:47 PM
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kc0003's photo
Tue 10/13/09 08:43 PM
Edited by kc0003 on Tue 10/13/09 08:44 PM
nice poring out....flowerforyou


sorry i cant answer the last part though...

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Tue 10/13/09 08:51 PM
Let down that drawbridge for the moat to be crossed...

I liked this write...flowerforyou

Kay10's photo
Wed 10/14/09 02:00 PM
Like ;-)

Interesting,Nice

Tc of you x

pkh's photo
Wed 10/14/09 03:43 PM
flowerforyou nice