Topic: "The Last Petal"
BYondLife's photo
Sun 10/11/09 05:35 PM
One more petal hits the floor.
As I see your face within the wind.
The gentle breeze caresses my flesh.
A soft moan parts my ashen tiers.
While bumps run up and down my arms.
I’d ask of you to guide me to heaven.
But you’ve already taken me there.
Eyes roll back to the simpliest touch.
Curled digits clench those sheets of silk.
Never have I felt so helpless.
Never have I wanted to feel any other way.
This blissful love you feed me.
Takes me to places beyond my dreams.
To a world I thought never existed.
Take this flower from the earth.
You always told me you loved them.
I can feel that tear glisten.
She loves me...
As one more petal hits the floor..

One more petal hits the floor....
I'd do anything to make your beauty
Bare nothing but smiles.
Endeavering into a life of servitude.
There is no hidden agenda.
I only want to bring you sunshine.
Like your fire as brightened my world.
Thoughts that this world revolves around the sun.
In reality; it just revolves around you.
Knees begin to tremble, as I lay witness.
The cloth that hugs your every curve.
Music plays the sweet promises.
Of forever and beyond.
That reassurances we both wanted.
Through sickness, through health
Through the good, through the bad.
Undeterred; I'll take your hand in mine.
Embarking through the days of the unknown.
I want nothing more..
Then to always be by your side.
She loves me not..
As one more petal hits the floor...

One more petal hits the floor....
Still I stand here, your very shadow.
I take the hits from arrows and stones.
I will not let this world hurt you.
The guardian of your heart.
Protecting it from all the evil in this life.
Dealing with the demons of your past.
Just close your eyes baby.
Notice that face they bear.
That is not my own.
Through every cold night.
I will hold onto you.
As if this night was our last.
Every day I fall even more for you.
And I'd have it no other way.
To all those memories we will create.
And to not forgetting the ones.
That we both already share.
This love I feel; I want to last forever.
Come closer into my sweet embrace.
Shared visions create the steps of tomorrow.
We can both dream together.
She loves me eternal...
As that last petal hits the floor…

GESpiritWolf's photo
Sun 10/11/09 05:44 PM
Hello BYondLife,

Accept my wishful blessings for health, happiness and success to you and those you love.

An essence of spirit and love is shared in your words here. Hmmm. Maybe a nice song to compose.

Many Blessings,
SpiritWolf

BYondLife's photo
Sun 10/11/09 05:48 PM

Hello BYondLife,

Accept my wishful blessings for health, happiness and success to you and those you love.

An essence of spirit and love is shared in your words here. Hmmm. Maybe a nice song to compose.

Many Blessings,
SpiritWolf


Thank you SpiritWolf; and the same to you.
That's a good idea.
But I'll tell you one thing.
You wouldn't want me to be the one who sings it. laugh

no photo
Sun 10/11/09 05:50 PM
Fabulous write there...flowerforyou

greeneyedlady42's photo
Sun 10/11/09 05:52 PM
O-M-G!!

Theres another great one. The imagery in this is fabulous...

Bravo!

BYondLife's photo
Sun 10/11/09 05:52 PM

Fabulous write there...flowerforyou


Ah-ha!
So it's love poems that you prefer. :]
Thank you.
glasses

no photo
Sun 10/11/09 05:55 PM


Fabulous write there...flowerforyou


Ah-ha!
So it's love poems that you prefer. :]
Thank you.
glasses


I love all types of descriptive poems that can turn the tele on in my minds eye...Reading and seeing a poem come to life is the best...

BYondLife's photo
Sun 10/11/09 05:56 PM

O-M-G!!

Theres another great one. The imagery in this is fabulous...

Bravo!


Again.
Thank you.

flowers
For your kind words;
You canhave the flowers I've collected.

rofl