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Topic: The Remains (Of The Damage Done)
kc0003's photo
Sun 10/11/09 02:55 AM

I’d relinquish the
Fallacious
Possessions
Of a kingdom
For a lifetime
Of truth
In your eyes
If the walls
I’m fighting
Should crumble
Under the
Weight of the
Hooves
As I ride
And the dust
That soon
Settles on the
Mirror of life
Wipe away
Like your latest
Reprise

Allow me
Access to your
Sliver moon heart
Encased in
A mummified
Shroud of
Betrayal
And deceit
That I may
Plant a
More worthy
Seed
Deep in the
Very womb
Of your
Trepidation
Fear not
My temperate
Hand
Dissect my
Cerulean eyes
Look deep
Into a soul
Illuminated
By loves
Eternal flame
And shed the
Confining
Restraints
Of bygone
Repression
To live free
In "this"
Moment
Live free
In these arms
That sit
Idly by
Waiting for you
To surrender, to
Succumb
In spite of
The lingering
Effects you
So poorly
Conceal
Waiting for
The time
When you will
Be au fait with
The fact
That in my world
There was...
And never will be
Anything
Before you...




kc09

BYondLife's photo
Sun 10/11/09 03:01 AM
Not saying it means much..
..but I love it..

kc0003's photo
Sun 10/11/09 03:12 AM

Not saying it means much..
..but I love it..





i appreciate you reading and taking the time to respond...drinker

welcome to the site...drinker drinker

BYondLife's photo
Sun 10/11/09 03:23 AM


Not saying it means much..
..but I love it..





i appreciate you reading and taking the time to respond...drinker

welcome to the site...drinker drinker


Well, aside from women..
I love poetry and all that is writing.
I admire your style..
..I wish I had your lingual intellect though..
i know alot of big words..
..but hell if I know what half of them actually mean..
XD
End up using them out of context half the time..

kc0003's photo
Sun 10/11/09 03:45 AM



Not saying it means much..
..but I love it..





i appreciate you reading and taking the time to respond...drinker

welcome to the site...drinker drinker


Well, aside from women..
I love poetry and all that is writing.
I admire your style..
..I wish I had your lingual intellect though..
i know alot of big words..
..but hell if I know what half of them actually mean..
XD
End up using them out of context half the time..





thank you...i am trying to get better at that myself all in due time i guess...

no photo
Sun 10/11/09 04:19 AM
i like this only now i have to get out my dictionary laugh laugh

thanks a lot :tongue:

no photo
Sun 10/11/09 06:10 AM
Great write KC...thank you for sharingflowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Sun 10/11/09 09:51 AM
oh yes, yes ... vivid and richly textured ... cerulean blue ... the colour of wide open sky bigsmile

flowerforyou :heart:



(and I didn't even need a dictionary :wink: laugh )

Holly4459's photo
Sun 10/11/09 09:53 AM
nicely writtenflowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 10/11/09 11:15 AM
I see an open heart...

(((KC))) flowers

kc0003's photo
Sun 10/11/09 01:25 PM

Great write KC...thank you for sharingflowerforyou





thank you....flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Sun 10/11/09 01:31 PM

oh yes, yes ... vivid and richly textured ... cerulean blue ... the colour of wide open sky bigsmile

flowerforyou :heart:



(and I didn't even need a dictionary :wink: laugh )






ha! and why doesnt that surprise me.... happy

thank you for stopping in.... flowers

kc0003's photo
Sun 10/11/09 05:10 PM
thank you holly....flowerforyou

no photo
Sun 10/11/09 06:12 PM

oh yes, yes ... vivid and richly textured ... cerulean blue ... the colour of wide open sky bigsmile

flowerforyou :heart:



(and I didn't even need a dictionary :wink: laugh )





show off....:tongue:

kc0003's photo
Sun 10/11/09 06:45 PM


oh yes, yes ... vivid and richly textured ... cerulean blue ... the colour of wide open sky bigsmile

flowerforyou :heart:



(and I didn't even need a dictionary :wink: laugh )





show off....:tongue:






laugh laugh laugh

AZKait's photo
Sun 10/11/09 08:14 PM
That write is more difficult than it looks to be...
I loved it.
flowers

greeneyedlady42's photo
Sun 10/11/09 09:56 PM
Very nice KC-

Your description is elloquent...

kc0003's photo
Mon 10/12/09 12:02 AM

That write is more difficult than it looks to be...
I loved it.
flowers




thank you az i appreciate that

flowers flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Mon 10/12/09 04:53 AM

Very nice KC-

Your description is elloquent...






thank you....flowerforyou

no photo
Mon 10/12/09 06:25 AM
Well put,wonderful write flowers

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