Topic: I'm new, this is my 1st of many here. pls no stealing?
traineddragon's photo
Thu 10/08/09 01:59 AM
REFLECTIONS OF YOU



Standing in a line of mine
That we have been scared to see
A vision, lost among a dream
Longing for a women,
A women like you, I'm begging
So I scream a delicate desire
That we mourn for.

As I sit here soaking up the rain
Reflections of you dawning
Shinning down upon me the pain
So unfeathered but just so full of you
I've reflected upon who you are of many times
I'm scared to say and to see as why
Again I will never follow you
None of the words you use, true.
We laugh, we cry together
And still it means nothing to you.

I reflect the fears of pain
That will haunt me for eternity
As I sit and dwell, begging
To remember a women you are..
We suffer together,
Tears flow down among my jaw line
Cause now I can only dream
About the women you were
So desirable I scream of the
Reflections of you..

no photo
Thu 10/08/09 02:08 AM
Nice write....and no worries...we are writer friendly around here

traineddragon's photo
Thu 10/08/09 02:10 AM
ok. Good, thanks for informing me of that..
bigsmile

Holly4459's photo
Thu 10/08/09 02:11 AM

REFLECTIONS OF YOU



Standing in a line of mine
That we have been scared to see
A vision, lost among a dream
Longing for a women,
A women like you, I'm begging
So I scream a delicate desire
That we mourn for.

As I sit here soaking up the rain
Reflections of you dawning
Shinning down upon me the pain
So unfeathered but just so full of you
I've reflected upon who you are of many times
I'm scared to say and to see as why
Again I will never follow you
None of the words you use, true.
We laugh, we cry together
And still it means nothing to you.

I reflect the fears of pain
That will haunt me for eternity
As I sit and dwell, begging
To remember a women you are..
We suffer together,
Tears flow down among my jaw line
Cause now I can only dream
About the women you were
So desirable I scream of the
Reflections of you..

Nicely written!flowerforyou

traineddragon's photo
Thu 10/08/09 02:15 AM

Nicely written!flowerforyou


Yeah? Ty very much I like to hear that..
:banana:

greeneyedlady42's photo
Thu 10/08/09 06:11 AM
Thank you for sharing that --
Very heartfelt...Bravo!

pkh's photo
Thu 10/08/09 08:56 AM
good write

Gossipmpm's photo
Thu 10/08/09 09:05 AM
Really good!!


Keep them coming!!!


Welcome


Tammy:heart:


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Thu 10/08/09 09:05 AM
drinker

traineddragon's photo
Sat 10/10/09 03:01 AM
Edited by traineddragon on Sat 10/10/09 03:01 AM
thank you vm everyone if you write as well pls point me into the right direction..



I write many, but I never post things I have on paper its just freestyling expressions i guess to call them?>