Topic: I'm new, this is my 1st of many here. pls no stealing? | |
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REFLECTIONS OF YOU
Standing in a line of mine That we have been scared to see A vision, lost among a dream Longing for a women, A women like you, I'm begging So I scream a delicate desire That we mourn for. As I sit here soaking up the rain Reflections of you dawning Shinning down upon me the pain So unfeathered but just so full of you I've reflected upon who you are of many times I'm scared to say and to see as why Again I will never follow you None of the words you use, true. We laugh, we cry together And still it means nothing to you. I reflect the fears of pain That will haunt me for eternity As I sit and dwell, begging To remember a women you are.. We suffer together, Tears flow down among my jaw line Cause now I can only dream About the women you were So desirable I scream of the Reflections of you.. |
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Nice write....and no worries...we are writer friendly around here
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ok. Good, thanks for informing me of that..
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REFLECTIONS OF YOU Standing in a line of mine That we have been scared to see A vision, lost among a dream Longing for a women, A women like you, I'm begging So I scream a delicate desire That we mourn for. As I sit here soaking up the rain Reflections of you dawning Shinning down upon me the pain So unfeathered but just so full of you I've reflected upon who you are of many times I'm scared to say and to see as why Again I will never follow you None of the words you use, true. We laugh, we cry together And still it means nothing to you. I reflect the fears of pain That will haunt me for eternity As I sit and dwell, begging To remember a women you are.. We suffer together, Tears flow down among my jaw line Cause now I can only dream About the women you were So desirable I scream of the Reflections of you.. |
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Nicely written! Yeah? Ty very much I like to hear that.. |
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Thank you for sharing that --
Very heartfelt...Bravo! |
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good write
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Really good!!
Keep them coming!!! Welcome Tammy |
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Edited by
traineddragon
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Sat 10/10/09 03:01 AM
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thank you vm everyone if you write as well pls point me into the right direction..
I write many, but I never post things I have on paper its just freestyling expressions i guess to call them?> |
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