Topic: Perfect Evening
mig25's photo
Wed 10/07/09 04:42 PM
Perfect Evening


The world seems keep revolving
and evolving to the moods of so many,
but in meantime,
would you mind,
if I,
if we,
just relaxed a bit.
I want to feel the comfort of your arms; ah, your embrace gets me every time.

In the meantime, baby,
while the world is revealing the secrets of the sun through a maze of shadows and everyone seems to have a story to tell,
would you mind,
if I just ease slowly into your kiss. Can we let silence and serenity speak?
Maybe I’ll change clothes and relax. Maybe I’ll put on something as relaxing as nothing.
Mmm, that would be so nice.

I love that smile, a bit devilish and so charming. Nothing it is then.

Baby, would you mind if I,
after a long day, just stop and let go? While the bath water is running,
would you mind,
if I just indulge in what your love has to offer me;
peace,
passion,
and fulfillment.
Maybe we could light a candle. Pour some wine.
And in the meantime, just forget about work.

Of course we could order out . . . Chinese?
Or we could simply forget about eating; I’ll just be your dessert.
There’s that smile again.

Mmm, loving you is so nice.





Missy128m's photo
Wed 10/07/09 05:14 PM
This was really good. It had a spoken word vibe to it. I could imagine you speaking it and adding some extra flavor. :tongue: biggrin good job!

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Wed 10/07/09 05:48 PM
What a perfect evening alright...Wonderful...flowerforyou

kelli91's photo
Wed 10/07/09 06:20 PM
It's almost relaxing to read laugh
Wonderful poem:smile: bigsmile flowerforyou