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Topic: Bare Bones
Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Tue 09/29/09 09:19 AM
What IS It All About? You’ve heard the phrase, “What’s that about?”. The "Hatfields and McCoys". Life’s sorrows and joy’s. Losing or winning. Raw wool or yarn Determined by the mere act of spinning. Cut through all the processes Of getting from point A to B, What is the point Of life’s elations or catastrophes? A door opens or closes. Is it all about that door? No, it’s all about whatever enters or exits Through that doorway And the affect/effect(s) it will have on YOU!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 09/29/09 09:42 AM
Brilliant........ The effect/affects linger for eternity,,,, some facing blind visions, and for some,,, the possibilities

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Wed 09/30/09 05:58 AM
Yeah, but what if nothing comes through the doorway and something on the other side slams the door in your face? hee hee Nice write.

brwnkimba Joined Tue 05/22/07 Posts: 1276	Wed 09/30/09 08:31 AM
Sometimes my front door opens by itself It's been happening for years and always around 6:15 a.m WINFIELDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 09/30/09 09:41 AM Edited by Differentkindofwench on Wed 09/30/09 09:47 AM
Yeah, but what if nothing comes through the doorway and something on the other side slams the door in your face? hee hee Nice write. I feel like the oracle in the third Aladdin movie. Believe it or not, a slammed door will also "show you, THE WAY......" Ya back off, regroup, and next thing ya know, that Ta-Daaaa! moment is right there all up in yo face.

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Wed 09/30/09 09:43 AM
No bones about it Lady you like to make me think! Love this one

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 09/30/09 09:43 AM
Sometimes my front door opens by itself It's been happening for years and always around 6:15 a.m WINFIELDS!!!!!!!!!!!!! ooo, sounds like a psychic impression! Have you ever checked out the history of the house? Does Winfeilds mean it's time for coffee?

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 09/30/09 09:53 AM
thanks, mom! Not just you, sister! As you well know, a lot of things arouse my curiosity and then it progresses to "well, hmmm I wonder??????" I'm beginning to think I was born with a shovel in my hands

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Wed 09/30/09 09:56 AM
Dig deeper Lady, dig deeper! As long as there's breath in your lungs your search will continue but I hope for you that you find satisfaction in it every day. My thanks to you for being the wonderful woman you are!!

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 09/30/09 09:57 AM
Back at'cha BABY!

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 09/30/09 10:04 AM
Amazing write

brwnkimba Joined Tue 05/22/07 Posts: 1276	Wed 09/30/09 10:53 AM
Sometimes my front door opens by itself It's been happening for years and always around 6:15 a.m WINFIELDS!!!!!!!!!!!!! ooo, sounds like a psychic impression! Have you ever checked out the history of the house? Does Winfeilds mean it's time for coffee? No on the house research, I don't really want to know and I just say "Hi" when it happens and keep on truckin'. The 'Winfields', ahh man that was from an old Abbott & Costello movie called 'Comin' Round the Mountain' sorry I was just trippin' out a little bit more than usual. When you made reference to the Hatfields & McCoys it made me think of that film.

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 09/30/09 11:08 AM
You know now that you mentioned that movie, I'll be flippin through channels in the next couple of days and it'll be on then I'll "knowwwww the rest of the story"

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 10/01/09 12:25 PM