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You may wonder
what is real or fake You may ponder Every decision you make Nothing seems real these days true love doesn't seem to matter compliments come in many ways It is meant to flatter Sometimes when he smiles I can feel it in my soul But it only lasts a little while and then I am again cold This feeling consumes me Like no other My sould seems to bleed why do I even bother I smile again When I hear his calming words I cover my pain and everything is a blur I only want some one to hold me on cold dreadful nights brushing my body lightly and whispering Everything is alright |
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This is so gentle. There's an easiness to your writing that makes everything all right
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You may wonder what is real or fake You may ponder Every decision you make Nothing seems real these days true love doesn't seem to matter compliments come in many ways It is meant to flatter Sometimes when he smiles I can feel it in my soul But it only lasts a little while and then I am again cold This feeling consumes me Like no other My sould seems to bleed why do I even bother I smile again When I hear his calming words I cover my pain and everything is a blur I only want some one to hold me on cold dreadful nights brushing my body lightly and whispering Everything is alright  beautiful
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Edited by
nvkikigirl
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great writing!!
 
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Edited by
MirrorMirror
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Sun 09/20/09 10:21 PM
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Edited by
MirrorMirror
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Sun 09/20/09 11:51 PM
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Edited by
MirrorMirror
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Sun 09/20/09 11:50 PM
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Edited by
MirrorMirror
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Mon 09/21/09 12:00 AM
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To writer_gurl
I did a thing last night (You may wonder) You know those future games (what is real or fake) I turned off all the lights (You may ponder) Oh, the future came (Every decision you make) You were by my side (Nothing seems real these days) Will you explain-oh yeah (True love doesn't seem to matter) Real rhyme or reason for those future games (compliments come in many ways,it is meant flatter) Now you were there last night (Sometimes when he smiles) And oh were you afraid (I can feel it in my soul) Of things wed come upon (But it only lasts a little while) While playing future games (and then I am again cold) But baby its alright and so have faith (This feeling consumes me like no other) Oh yeah, you invent the future that you want to face (My soul seems to bleed,why do I even bother) How many people sit home at night Wondering if they will be here tonight Wondering if children will he bring to the light Inherit the world, or inherit the night Wondering if neighbors are thinking the same All of the wild things tomorrow will tame Talking of journeys that happen in vain Well I know Im not the only one To ever spend my life sitting playing future games You better take your time (I smile again) You know theres no escape (When I hear his calming words) The future sends a sign (I cover my pain) Of things we will create (and everything is a blur) Baby its alright (I only want someone) And so have faith (to hold me) Oh yeah, you invent the future that you want to face (brushing my body lightly,and whispering everything is alright) How many people sit home at night Wondering if they will be here tonight Wondering if children will he bring to the light Inherit the world, or inherit the night Wondering if neighbors are thinking the same All of the wild things tomorrow will tame Talking of journeys that happen in vain And I know Im not the only one To ever spend my life sitting playing future games |
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That's lovely, you're very talented.
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cool
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Very nice w_g
...so glad you're continuing to write
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i like that...a lot
good job
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I'm experiencing deja-vu
