Topic: Saying Goodbye
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Mon 05/28/07 08:33 PM
In my twilights last gleaming
My breath will cease
My heart will beat no more
My eyes will search out no more
My laughter will no longer ring out
But I will still be here
In the memories of those I have left behind
In my words written in ink and sealed with blood
I will exist in all that you see
I will forever be with you
So sadness I do not want to see
Do not shed tears for me
For I am still here
My spirit enshrouds you
Lifting you higher than before
Do not mourn my passing
Revel in my life and celebrate my being
And know deep within your heart
I will be waiting for you.....



** don't freak out on me ok..not goin anywhere not gonna do anything
stupid....just put myself in someones spot who was passing on and what
they might say maky...so relax..this Poet's time isn't over by a long
shot**

LAMom's photo
Tue 05/29/07 11:15 AM
{{{{{{{{Beautiful}}}}}}}}}
These words remind me of the day my Mother passed, some of her lasts
words to me,, :cry: :heart: flowerforyou

sandylou2456's photo
Tue 05/29/07 11:20 AM



Beautiful CCP flowerforyou

Oceans5555's photo
Tue 05/29/07 01:43 PM
Yes, this rang so true, Poet. Thank you.

brokenheart
Oceans

buttons's photo
Tue 05/29/07 01:46 PM
whew glad to hear!!!!!flowerforyou flowerforyou good poem so
realistic on how one feels a lot of the time!!!flowerforyou
flowerforyou

catchme_ifucan's photo
Tue 05/29/07 01:53 PM
:heart: ((((((Sis)))))) you Rawk!!

herewego's photo
Tue 05/29/07 05:51 PM
you are amazing.. flowerforyou

Morena350's photo
Tue 05/29/07 08:09 PM
your the best!!

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Tue 05/29/07 08:27 PM
:heart: AHHH, My Miss poet of heart and dreams, another master
piece.........GREAT,
And LOL I know who the explanation is for,wink,,,,,lolsmokin

mtironroses's photo
Tue 05/29/07 08:31 PM
Very special CCP flowerforyou

karmafury's photo
Wed 05/30/07 12:46 PM
Beautifully written Poet.flowerforyou flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 05/30/07 01:17 PM
:heart: (((Poet)))

Wildflower2286's photo
Wed 05/30/07 06:49 PM
That was Beautiful ... Last year I lost 3 family members and reading
this helped my soul...thank you

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Wed 05/30/07 07:00 PM
((((wildflower)))))) you're welcome, I am glad my words have
helpedflowerforyou

lionsbrew's photo
Wed 05/30/07 07:09 PM
thats pretty cool sis you know i always love readin your work happy
happy happy