Topic: How Did You See?
tbird48's photo
Fri 09/11/09 06:46 PM
Edited by tbird48 on Fri 09/11/09 06:47 PM
How Did You See?


How do you see what I try
so hard to hide?
How do you know, all
that I try not to show?

When the one that loves
me so, doesn't see
the things that mean
so much to me.

You see my weaknesses,
strenghts, my dreams,
desires and my fears.
Why doesn't he?

I love the way that
you reach me so
very deeply. Yet, I
wish you were him.

I can't love you
my mind won't
let me. I see also
what you try to hide.

You are a very rare
jewel in this world
of stones. A person one
meets once in a lifetime.

I couldn't share
you with the world.
I am selfish and
easily hurt.

So I'll stay with
him, and teach him
to see, the fires
you have awakened in me.


Tina

Lilypetal's photo
Fri 09/11/09 06:50 PM
Beautiful!

writer_gurl's photo
Fri 09/11/09 06:52 PM

How Did You See?


How do you see what I try
so hard to hide?
How do you know, all
that I try not to show?

When the one that loves
me so, doesn't see
the things that mean
so much to me.

You see my weaknesses,
strenghts, my dreams,
desires and my fears.
Why doesn't he?

I love the way that
you reach me so
very deeply. Yet, I
wish you were him.

I can't love you
my mind won't
let me. I see also
what you try to hide.

You are a very rare
jewel in this world
of stones. A person one
meets once in a lifetime.

I couldn't share
you with the world.
I am selfish and
easily hurt.

So I'll stay with
him, and teach him
to see, the fires
you have awakened in me.


Tina

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Gossipmpm's photo
Fri 09/11/09 06:59 PM
:heart:

wannacuddlewthme's photo
Fri 09/11/09 07:09 PM
Wow.Nice writeflowerforyou

tbird48's photo
Fri 09/11/09 07:13 PM
Thank you!:smile:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 09/12/09 03:05 PM
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