Topic: Is this what love is?
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Mon 09/07/09 08:38 PM
Edited by KiTtY19 on Mon 09/07/09 08:39 PM
What is this feeling?
the repercussions from it
why do i feel my heart
in my stomach

What are you doing
living in my mind
why am i so fearless
you wont make me cry
I'm taking a steps
and i always trip
why do i feel better
when its you that i kiss

What is this giggle
its normally a sob
I'm so nerves
but not so numb
i feel the warmth of a better day
when I'm with you
I'm not so afraid
to take those chances
i would have never took
why do i get so jumpy
when you turn to look

I know i need you
as early as this
doubt doesn't haunt me
is this what love is?
can you be the one to show me
the worlds not all bad
are you that person
in all those dreams Ive had?

Are you such a man
that can take all my pain
even give you the title dad
for my son to name
will you be his father
and show how things are done
could you be proud
to call my little boy son?

Already so important
in my life
you strip every tear
from my tired eyes
you make me feel different
pressure off my chest
when i sleep, i dream of you
and so easy i rest
what is this feeling
where theres normally stress
could this really be
what true love is?

written for: Dorian Moon
thank you for having faith in me
when no one else would :)
i love you

nvkikigirl's photo
Mon 09/07/09 08:42 PM
a great piece. well written...it's also great to see others have found their loves...:thumbsup:
drinker :thumbsup:

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Mon 09/07/09 09:34 PM
thank you :) and i have, hes the one for me :p

nvkikigirl's photo
Mon 09/07/09 10:09 PM
very cool!!! :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :smile: drinker

Nicholai's photo
Tue 09/08/09 08:10 AM
I agree, this is the best I have seen today

Gossipmpm's photo
Tue 09/08/09 08:13 AM
:heart:

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Tue 09/08/09 10:46 AM
thanks guys :) its nice to hear that when you put your heart in to something. <3

AngelLight's photo
Tue 09/08/09 01:25 PM
It sure sounds like it is! :smile:

All the very best KiT...

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 09/08/09 01:45 PM
Yep have to agree with AngelLight sounds like love to
me too. Best wishes and blessings KiTtY19 nice write
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Tue 09/08/09 04:07 PM
thanks guys, yall are sweet. hesitance actually on mingle2! he goes by (irish21) and i wuve him <3

MzEm's photo
Wed 09/09/09 12:42 PM
I concur, a very moving piece.