Topic: Is this what love is? | |
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Edited by
KiTtY19
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Mon 09/07/09 08:39 PM
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What is this feeling?
the repercussions from it why do i feel my heart in my stomach What are you doing living in my mind why am i so fearless you wont make me cry I'm taking a steps and i always trip why do i feel better when its you that i kiss What is this giggle its normally a sob I'm so nerves but not so numb i feel the warmth of a better day when I'm with you I'm not so afraid to take those chances i would have never took why do i get so jumpy when you turn to look I know i need you as early as this doubt doesn't haunt me is this what love is? can you be the one to show me the worlds not all bad are you that person in all those dreams Ive had? Are you such a man that can take all my pain even give you the title dad for my son to name will you be his father and show how things are done could you be proud to call my little boy son? Already so important in my life you strip every tear from my tired eyes you make me feel different pressure off my chest when i sleep, i dream of you and so easy i rest what is this feeling where theres normally stress could this really be what true love is? written for: Dorian Moon thank you for having faith in me when no one else would :) i love you |
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a great piece. well written...it's also great to see others have found their loves...
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thank you :) and i have, hes the one for me :p
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very cool!!!
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I agree, this is the best I have seen today
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thanks guys :) its nice to hear that when you put your heart in to something. <3
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It sure sounds like it is!
All the very best KiT... |
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Yep have to agree with AngelLight sounds like love to
me too. Best wishes and blessings KiTtY19 nice write |
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thanks guys, yall are sweet. hesitance actually on mingle2! he goes by (irish21) and i wuve him <3
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I concur, a very moving piece.
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