You made me smile in every single way

I went to sleep looking forward to the next day

U were my sunshine I basked in ur rays

Ur beauty was great apon u I would gase

My heart had a burning desire u could call it a blaze

Talk all day talk all night

Threw the dark times I followed ur light

U were my ears my mouth and my sight

I followed u with all of my heart

First time I saw u I was in love from the start

U were my everything nothing else did I need

They told to to slow down with caution praceed

I didn't believe them their words I didn't heed

Now I'm sitting here wondering why my heart bleeds


Sorry if this isn't good or up to par I've just gone threw a bad breakup and am trying to get some pain out and keep it out. But I could use any words of encouragement right now. And tell me what u think of the peom. Thank all of u.

Maybe it is now time for you to be someones everything, with a brilliant ray of sunshine to light up both your lives...Good luck on a new journey of love to come...Your poem was great...

very nice,welcome

Welcome and I am sorry for your loss....

Very good write! Sorry for your lose. To brighter days ahead
and welcome to the poetry section.