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Topic: You Suck..
DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Mon 08/31/09 11:09 PM
People Suck when they have to leave.... The farewells wont end.. The smiles Stained and pictured of good times... When you leave.. You Suck.. I know you say the same about me.. I suck.. Its only till theres a next time.. A wave to indicate a departure.. One long before it even happens.. Good Bye.. Untill next time.. In my head a voice sighs.. Cursing your exsitance for becoming Close..

Calleigh12 Joined Tue 04/01/08 Posts: 17193	Mon 08/31/09 11:22 PM
Who told you I suck? That was told in complete confidence.

DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Mon 08/31/09 11:22 PM
No one did...

DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Mon 08/31/09 11:23 PM
I kind of had a bitof a hard time getting the words right.. ^^"

Totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 24210	Mon 08/31/09 11:26 PM
People Suck when they have to leave.... The farewells wont end.. The smiles Stained and pictured of good times... When you leave.. You Suck.. I know you say the same about me.. I suck.. Its only till theres a next time.. A wave to indicate a departure.. One long before it even happens.. Good Bye.. Untill next time.. In my head a voice sighs.. Cursing your exsitance for becoming Close.. Great poem! Is it about death? That's exactly how I feel at every funeral I attend.

DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Mon 08/31/09 11:29 PM
Its about leaving ^^ Death being a Leave aswell, just slight more of a leave then usual

FearandLoathing Joined Fri 12/28/07 Posts: 30121	Tue 09/01/09 12:29 AM
People Suck when they have to leave.... The farewells wont end.. The smiles Stained and pictured of good times... When you leave.. You Suck.. I know you say the same about me.. I suck.. Its only till theres a next time.. A wave to indicate a departure.. One long before it even happens.. Good Bye.. Untill next time.. In my head a voice sighs.. Cursing your exsitance for becoming Close.. Such is life...just a slow crawl towards death. Might as well become the greatest Goddamn force known to man before the end of the crawl.

Calleigh12 Joined Tue 04/01/08 Posts: 17193	Tue 09/01/09 01:10 AM
People Suck when they have to leave.... The farewells wont end.. The smiles Stained and pictured of good times... When you leave.. You Suck.. I know you say the same about me.. I suck.. Its only till theres a next time.. A wave to indicate a departure.. One long before it even happens.. Good Bye.. Untill next time.. In my head a voice sighs.. Cursing your exsitance for becoming Close.. Such is life...just a slow crawl towards death. Might as well become the greatest Goddamn force known to man before the end of the crawl. i thought that was gravity?

Katzenschnauzer Joined Sat 03/28/09 Posts: 2731	Tue 09/01/09 01:12 AM
Okie dokie then! Let's all go out and suck up some sunshine!

Calleigh12 Joined Tue 04/01/08 Posts: 17193	Tue 09/01/09 01:40 AM
Okie dokie then! Let's all go out and suck up some sunshine!

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Tue 09/01/09 06:41 AM
Wish I had some Oreos.

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Tue 09/01/09 06:43 AM
Sometimes in darkness We find the light

trgirl Joined Tue 01/20/09 Posts: 2368	Tue 09/01/09 06:45 AM


DeathsTreaty Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 14622	Tue 09/01/09 08:35 AM
Oreos would be nice.... I agree with you Fear Going out with a Bang....I already planed mine^^ The "Sunshine" is blinding May it Rain a pour even greater the next day If luck strikes, then the rain will Freeze and Snow will Come A Stormcold enough to bare Polar Bears... A good day that will be..

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Tue 09/01/09 08:49 AM
Double Filled?

TwoTallOne Joined Thu 01/04/07 Posts: 16854	Tue 09/01/09 09:18 AM
I wouldn't mind "suckin" on a beer right now

ReddBeans Joined Sat 10/27/07 Posts: 6930	Tue 09/01/09 09:23 AM
At least I don't swaller

newarkjw Joined Sun 05/25/08 Posts: 17172	Tue 09/01/09 09:59 AM
People Suck when they have to leave.... The farewells wont end.. The smiles Stained and pictured of good times... When you leave.. You Suck.. I know you say the same about me.. I suck.. Its only till theres a next time.. A wave to indicate a departure.. One long before it even happens.. Good Bye.. Untill next time.. In my head a voice sighs.. Cursing your exsitance for becoming Close.. Buck up little camper............

earthytaurus76 Joined Wed 04/08/09 Posts: 6603	Tue 09/01/09 10:03 AM
BRING THE DEAD!

JustAGuy2112 Joined Sun 12/16/07 Posts: 18033	Tue 09/01/09 10:04 AM
OMG!!! " I'm not dead!!! " " You will be. Just get on with it. "