Hey all, I've only just signed up and I've never been a member of a dating site before, so I was wondering if anyone had any helpful constructive criticism about my profile.

Just to clarify I'm talking about my whole profile, not just my pictures (well picture if your really quick to respond, but I'm about to upload another couple). I want advice on better ways to word stuff, etc, basically anything you think will get my profile more noticed. If you do have picture advice please be specific! I'm not looking for a 'hot or not' thing here, but advice about better styles of picture etc would be appreciated where applicable

straight forward, honest, simple & plain...
nice pix

hi and welcome

Looks good - welcome