Topic: Cold As Ice
writer_gurl's photo
Thu 08/27/09 05:45 PM
No words can say
No emotions shown
How I feel this way
Torment that is not known

I thought I saw his face
I thought I knew his words
My days were full of grace
Now how could they be any worse

Light came, angels hold
shadowing my dread
Now my body iced and cold
as though I am already dead

darkness came upon me
after the light
I can no longer see
my touch no longer tight

The face I saw
The eyes so intense
The pain is still raw
never making any sense

It was not meant to be
His words did not matter
For the image I used to see
Always seems to shatter



wannacuddlewthme's photo
Thu 08/27/09 05:46 PM
Oh wow.Good oneflowerforyou

writer_gurl's photo
Thu 08/27/09 06:06 PM

Oh wow.Good oneflowerforyou

Thanks, nothing is better than a personal experience:smile:

writer_gurl's photo
Thu 08/27/09 06:09 PM

Oh wow.Good oneflowerforyou

Thanks, nothing is better than a personal experience:smile:

nvkikigirl's photo
Thu 08/27/09 06:21 PM
Edited by nvkikigirl on Thu 08/27/09 06:22 PM
this is very good, writerdrinker

Ladylid2012's photo
Thu 08/27/09 06:59 PM
great writeflowers

no photo
Thu 08/27/09 09:43 PM
Good poem..I understand it well..been there too..but came thru and am better for it!

Differentkindofwench's photo
Thu 08/27/09 10:49 PM

Good poem..I understand it well..been there too..but came thru and am better for it!
The OP and this comment, Yesssss!