Topic: to take a chance
bedlum1's photo
Thu 08/27/09 01:57 PM
i can spend my life picking apart,
every little thing i see,
or judging people from the start,
because they're not how i think they should be,
i could pass by doors that could be unlocked,
because i might not like what lays behind,
or keep the ship of my spirit docked,
never set sail to see what i find.
i can let what other people think,
stop me from making a choice,
and in the pits of sorrow sink,
because i was to weak to use my voice.
instead i think i'll bare my soul,
and let my spirit dance,
i'll never wonder what may have been,
because i was willing to take a chance.

come on in the waters fine people:banana:

Sharris's photo
Thu 08/27/09 02:02 PM

i can spend my life picking apart,
every little thing i see,
or judging people from the start,
because they're not how i think they should be,
i could pass by doors that could be unlocked,
because i might not like what lays behind,
or keep the ship of my spirit docked,
never set sail to see what i find.
i can let what other people think,
stop me from making a choice,
and in the pits of sorrow sink,
because i was to weak to use my voice.
instead i think i'll bare my soul,
and let my spirit dance,
i'll never wonder what may have been,
because i was willing to take a chance.

come on in the waters fine people:banana:

keep writing, sharing..it is healing for you and surprisingly, someone, somewhere needs just what you are sharing, feeling..it is strength and attaches..

writer_gurl's photo
Thu 08/27/09 02:16 PM
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redhead44613's photo
Thu 08/27/09 08:06 PM
amazing!! You have a talent sweetheart!!

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 08/28/09 11:56 AM
Been swimming and a dancin' lately myself.
No way I'm putting my life on a shelf! bigsmile

Neat write bedlum1 drinker flowerforyou

LightVoice's photo
Fri 08/28/09 09:10 PM
wow ~ I love it! Puts a very visable spin on "would've, could've, should've) flowerforyou

bedlum1's photo
Mon 08/31/09 05:30 PM

wow ~ I love it! Puts a very visable spin on "would've, could've, should've) flowerforyou
thank you, light