Topic: Unfathomable
Iam_aditi's photo
Thu 08/27/09 01:54 AM


~ My pains

Unfathomable !

Sometimes , even beyond the reach
of my shallow understanding
of everyday living .......

Pure , austere , untainted
but filled with writhing pangs .......

I don't even understand what love is !?
Too many tears have had to fall .....

what is it that we all are running after all.... ?

May be the elusive darkness
will never ever
lose it's Charm !!

~


Disclaimer : Sorry, if my poems create a sombre mood,
but truth is, I could never write a poem when I am happy
and jovial, but, down days gave me something to write on. Just sharing.

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Ladylid2012's photo
Thu 08/27/09 01:57 AM
you write whatever you feel...flowers

bohemianbugeater's photo
Thu 08/27/09 02:09 AM
my best writing are the ones that keep me up at night...a sentence nagging at me...a word or phrase...that no matter how hard i try to sleep it demands expression...sometimes this can go on and on and on...

none of my works are ever completely finished either...so i write them and date them in stages...

if what you write cant move you...how can it ever move others? reach in and pull that emotion to the surface? maybe a perspective they never knew they had.