i want a beautiful woman

i don't like beautiful woman

they are too critical of
the who within them

as they are made up
they take up too much
space

in their own worlds
i see these girls
and i can hardly
recognize their face

what they show me
i cannot embrace

I want a real woman
who needs no make up

a woman who can smile
outside as is

one that knows the
differences


as she keeps her
head up and
dresses in
a white shirt
opposed to black

a girl with
meat who likes
to flirt
like that

i want a woman
i want a girl

not some
made up chick
from
out of this world

beauty comes in all forms

thanks for the comment kc

i beg to differ

i would like to view 'all' as beautiful. but I would be lying to myself if I did.


replace the word 'all' with 'most' and i would more likely agree.

i get your point
and have to agree
it would be nice if it were all but, we know the reality
so maybe most is more to the truth of it

kc, you went from a cool dude to super cool dude. not sure how you would take my response.
thank you.

I so understand this write {{{d4tc}}}

So well communicated...to know what you want and need

Good write Sweet J

The true Beauty of a woman is not what you see with your eyes, it's what's in her heart, mind, and soul..

Nicely stated! I'm gonna go a little farther and switch "woman" to human or person and then wholeheartedly agree!

Nice insight, D4! >>>>>>>>>>>>(scampers off to bask in your diary versus poetry)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

It is only one,
a continuous ribbon
that weaves through
the lines,
connecting those audible
with the inaudible
movement and voice
that calls out to you.
By any other name,
she can only be
one rose, you will see,
you will choose
and she will know
when she has been plucked
by you, only, singly, you.
And she will know blessing.
Only one..
you..
two..
one only.

I don't know if mom referred to this one before with you, but man if she did, yeahhhh, it's you and you're beautiful mess!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K8Mz_kyRlWY

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh My Comfort songggggggggggggggggg



As I work in my garden,, My neighbors have heard this CD over and over again,,,

((( J ))))

Again,, Simply Wonderous

I have too many WOWs for this thread....

Wow to D4, a beautiful, beautiful piece!!!

Wow to Sharris..I always love your writing...!!!

and

Wow to Diff...never heard that song, but thanks for introducing me to it!

If I could dare to dream to be such a woman!

I will settle for being your friend and be very happy in that...


This is an amazing piece Jason... honesty at it's best