As I stand before you only one thing runs through my head,
do I take his life the way he took mine?
My soul screaming for his blood.

You look into my emotionless eyes with fear,
you know what I want.
I smile as you start to shake with fear.

The blade in my hand shines off the candle light.
I can not hide the demon you have awaken deep within.
A growl starts to build deep in my chest,
tears run off your face.

you know what is coming,
say your prays before its too late.
Say goodbye.
See what you have done?

I slowly walk closer to you.
the growl escapes my chest,
the last sound ever heard.

The blade is above you now,
what are you thinking in your last moment?
Are you regretting your past?
Do you believe you will be in heaven at the end?

I close my eyes as the blade starts to fall fast,
faster as it iches closer to you.
You cry in pain,
the blade cuts you deep.

Blood pouring out from your chest.
You don't need your heart,
you have never used it.
I leave the blade in you.

As I turn to walk away,
I can hear your cries becoming softer.
I now know you can never hurt again.
Never take someones life,
like you did to me.

Redhead44613

took a lot to write this one, having to relive the moments of what he did to me. I hope he burns in hell for what he did.

that very good

This poem did speak to me, as I just got out of a relationship a few days ago where I'd been used and cheated on big time. But I do want to tell you that there are a lot of good loving decent people out here that have been hurt and knows better than to pass up a relationship with a good person seeings it's so hard to find one anymore.

I just want you to know that I know first hand what you're going through because I'm feeling it too. But if you can, do your absolute best not to dwell anymore. Realize that he doesn't deserve you just like she doesn't deserve me and that there's lots of great looking guys that would give the world just for you to talk to them much less love them.

The last night I talked to her I told her that she was a worthless junkie and then I thanked her for doing what she did because by showing me that selfish people like her existed in the world she made me the strongest person I'd ever been and it's the truth. Just something to share.

this has nothing to do about a relationship gone bad. I was raped 2years ago. its for him

better to write than do hun..lol.excelent

....true

I'm so sorry lil red

What a haunting revenge

like u said sweety , someone who gets it..

*hugs*

i'm so sorry too