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Topic: Shadow of death.
fabo123 Joined Sun 05/04/08 Posts: 1746	Sun 08/23/09 07:15 AM
Dang girl... WOW! Powerful!... excellent write!... thanks WELL I hope your schooling gose good ok and I think alot like you do about meeting and we will hit it off ok cause we get in to doing alot of the same stuff ok. YES it seems like I ant the only one that like your thread cause some one keeps saying wow they like this thread ok I do to ok.

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Sun 08/23/09 07:31 AM
Fabo Your sounding more and more like someone else on this site Hmmmmm..........jmo

fabo123 Joined Sun 05/04/08 Posts: 1746	Sun 08/23/09 08:56 AM
Fabo Your sounding more and more like someone else on this site Hmmmmm..........jmo I dont know what in saying that makes you think im someone else cause I dont think that im saying any thing to make ppl think im someone else im just saying whats on my mind and if ppl think im someone els there rong ok.

fabo123 Joined Sun 05/04/08 Posts: 1746	Sun 08/23/09 02:09 PM
Fabo Your sounding more and more like someone else on this site Hmmmmm..........jmo I dont know what in saying that makes you think im someone else cause I dont think that im saying any thing to make ppl think im someone else im just saying whats on my mind and if ppl think im someone els there rong ok. I mean I dont know who im saposed to sound like IM just trying TO BE MY SELF OK IF SOME BODY ELS IS TRYING TO BE LIKE ME OK.

fabo123 Joined Sun 05/04/08 Posts: 1746	Sun 08/23/09 06:20 PM
Hello you might have see me on another thread because I talk to TINA and MIRROR ok so what do you think of me now im not a controller im just a lover ok. Fabo Your sounding more and more like someone else on this site Hmmmmm..........jmo I dont know what in saying that makes you think im someone else cause I dont think that im saying any thing to make ppl think im someone else im just saying whats on my mind and if ppl think im someone els there rong ok. I mean I dont know who im saposed to sound like IM just trying TO BE MY SELF OK IF SOME BODY ELS IS TRYING TO BE LIKE ME OK.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sun 08/23/09 06:33 PM
nicely done

fabo123 Joined Sun 05/04/08 Posts: 1746	Mon 08/24/09 06:49 AM
Fabo Your sounding more and more like someone else on this site Hmmmmm..........jmo WELL Iknow I need to find someone and make you happy and like to read things and be with someone be for something happens to meok I like you and want to talk to you some more if I can ok.

fabo123 Joined Sun 05/04/08 Posts: 1746	Mon 08/24/09 08:30 AM
Fabo Your sounding more and more like someone else on this site Hmmmmm..........jmo WELL Iknow I need to find someone and make you happy and like to read things and be with someone be for something happens to meok I like you and want to talk to you some more if I can ok. WELL you might have seen me on a nother thread cause I talk to MIRROR and TINA and I like this thread ok so will go on other threads not just this one ok.

Fusion99 Joined Thu 07/09/09 Posts: 927	Mon 08/24/09 05:04 PM
As I walk with the shadow of death I fear no pain. I know he will make it fast. The knife pierces my skin, as I moan in pleasure. This pain familial to me. Blood drips down my chest, the warmth feels like extacy on my cold fragile skin. A grin plays across his thin lips, I know he finds pleasure in this. The power I gave to him, he will abuse. The knife cuts deeper, I can't help but scream from pleasure. Please end this now, take my life. I can feel the knife ripping my heart, "yes" is all I can moan out. The room grows darker, all I hear is a faint laugh. I fall to the floor, only to lay in my own blood. Death is above me now, the only thing I ever wanted. Do you understand what you did to me, the moment you said goodbye? Redhead44613 This is awesome, I love the images here!

redhead44613 Joined Fri 01/18/08 Posts: 12976	Mon 08/24/09 07:59 PM
thank you

fabo123 Joined Sun 05/04/08 Posts: 1746	Mon 08/24/09 09:35 PM
thank you Hello I told you that there was alot of ppl that this sight and like poetry I do and I would like to lern about it ok.

fabo123 Joined Sun 05/04/08 Posts: 1746	Tue 08/25/09 10:37 AM
thank you Hello I told you that there was alot of ppl that this sight and like poetry I do and I would like to lern about it ok. WELL I want to say I think it is good and I wish I cauld make a poem but I cant so I just haff to get in to reading them but every one els can ok.

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Tue 08/25/09 10:47 AM
As I walk with the shadow of death I fear no pain. I know he will make it fast. The knife pierces my skin, as I moan in pleasure. This pain familial to me. Blood drips down my chest, the warmth feels like extacy on my cold fragile skin. A grin plays across his thin lips, I know he finds pleasure in this. The power I gave to him, he will abuse. The knife cuts deeper, I can't help but scream from pleasure. Please end this now, take my life. I can feel the knife ripping my heart, "yes" is all I can moan out. The room grows darker, all I hear is a faint laugh. I fall to the floor, only to lay in my own blood. Death is above me now, the only thing I ever wanted. Do you understand what you did to me, the moment you said goodbye? Redhead44613 Very nice write

fabo123 Joined Sun 05/04/08 Posts: 1746	Tue 08/25/09 01:36 PM
YES I know I like it to butI would like to know what you look like all I can see is your back ok, put your face on hear ok thenI will know who im talking to ok. As I walk with the shadow of death I fear no pain. I know he will make it fast. The knife pierces my skin, as I moan in pleasure. This pain familial to me. Blood drips down my chest, the warmth feels like extacy on my cold fragile skin. A grin plays across his thin lips, I know he finds pleasure in this. The power I gave to him, he will abuse. The knife cuts deeper, I can't help but scream from pleasure. Please end this now, take my life. I can feel the knife ripping my heart, "yes" is all I can moan out. The room grows darker, all I hear is a faint laugh. I fall to the floor, only to lay in my own blood. Death is above me now, the only thing I ever wanted. Do you understand what you did to me, the moment you said goodbye? Redhead44613 Very nice write