Topic: the lonely road(a morbid poem)
bedlum1's photo
Fri 08/21/09 04:35 PM
as i walk this lonely road,
i think of days gone by.
the feelings i carry are a heavy load,
so i sit and i break down and cry.
as i sit on that lonely road,
i grow crazy throughout the days,
i silently scream then go insane,
and srart rippin the skin from my face.
chunks of flesh lay on the ground,
and blood pours from my head,
the more i peel the less i feel,
and soon i will be dead.
next i rip out both my eyes,
because i'm sick of the things i see,
no longer will i ever cry,
no more tears will come from me.
from loss of blood i start to feint,
from the wounds that i have made.
my body start to turn cold,
as i'm layin in deaths shade,
next thing i know i awake,
and the stench of fear i smell,
i realize it was just a dream,
and i'm still trapped in this living hell.

redhead44613's photo
Fri 08/21/09 04:37 PM
wow....that was really good. Got goosebumps!

MirrorMirror's photo
Fri 08/21/09 04:37 PM

as i walk this lonely road,
i think of days gone by.
the feelings i carry are a heavy load,
so i sit and i break down and cry.
as i sit on that lonely road,
i grow crazy throughout the days,
i silently scream then go insane,
and srart rippin the skin from my face.
chunks of flesh lay on the ground,
and blood pours from my head,
the more i peel the less i feel,
and soon i will be dead.
next i rip out both my eyes,
because i'm sick of the things i see,
no longer will i ever cry,
no more tears will come from me.
from loss of blood i start to feint,
from the wounds that i have made.
my body start to turn cold,
as i'm layin in deaths shade,
next thing i know i awake,
and the stench of fear i smell,
i realize it was just a dream,
and i'm still trapped in this living hell.
:thumbsup:

Fusion99's photo
Fri 08/21/09 07:32 PM
Great Job!drinker drinker

no photo
Sat 08/22/09 06:22 AM
what a great ending...glasses

no photo
Sat 08/22/09 06:27 AM
liked it.

Gossipmpm's photo
Sat 08/22/09 06:30 AM
:heart: :smile: