Topic: the lonely road(a morbid poem) | |
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as i walk this lonely road,
i think of days gone by. the feelings i carry are a heavy load, so i sit and i break down and cry. as i sit on that lonely road, i grow crazy throughout the days, i silently scream then go insane, and srart rippin the skin from my face. chunks of flesh lay on the ground, and blood pours from my head, the more i peel the less i feel, and soon i will be dead. next i rip out both my eyes, because i'm sick of the things i see, no longer will i ever cry, no more tears will come from me. from loss of blood i start to feint, from the wounds that i have made. my body start to turn cold, as i'm layin in deaths shade, next thing i know i awake, and the stench of fear i smell, i realize it was just a dream, and i'm still trapped in this living hell. |
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wow....that was really good. Got goosebumps!
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as i walk this lonely road, i think of days gone by. the feelings i carry are a heavy load, so i sit and i break down and cry. as i sit on that lonely road, i grow crazy throughout the days, i silently scream then go insane, and srart rippin the skin from my face. chunks of flesh lay on the ground, and blood pours from my head, the more i peel the less i feel, and soon i will be dead. next i rip out both my eyes, because i'm sick of the things i see, no longer will i ever cry, no more tears will come from me. from loss of blood i start to feint, from the wounds that i have made. my body start to turn cold, as i'm layin in deaths shade, next thing i know i awake, and the stench of fear i smell, i realize it was just a dream, and i'm still trapped in this living hell. |
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Great Job!
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what a great ending...
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liked it.
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