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ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Fri 08/21/09 02:02 PM
it is the first time a lover has died on me. it was an entirely untimely death. this news coming in from a coincidental meeting and a removed source halted my breath and left my eyes to wander from the unknowing bearer sitting across from me. this person who once said peekaboo walking into a bathroom where i once dressed, this person who once sang his little rendition of the righteous brothers to me where i snuggled into his arms in a big, big bed, this person who one all summer long dumped ice in my shirt and threw me into a pool over and over, this person whose friends smiled slightly to me before i knew it was done.. my memories of him come softly then harshly. it's too strange to imagine. it must've been murder. he had so much and a big, big heart. i loved him never owning him. it was his way.

lastmanstanding602 Joined Tue 12/11/07 Posts: 1979	Fri 08/21/09 02:04 PM
Hey I am very sorry for you, I know what this pain feels like. God bless!

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Fri 08/21/09 02:08 PM
Sorry for your loss Such a heartwrenching write Prayers are said Tammy

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Fri 08/21/09 02:09 PM
Hey I am very sorry for you, I know what this pain feels like. God bless! what happens is in the inklings even though it seems you don't know what is up and around the corner thank you for posting, last man 602

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Fri 08/21/09 02:12 PM
Sorry for your loss Such a heartwrenching write Prayers are said Tammy it is heartwrenching, a good word to describe. many are missing him and some were glad. it was that kind of life. i am happy about the time we shared. thank you, Tammy

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Fri 08/21/09 02:15 PM
it is the first time a lover has died on me. it was an entirely untimely death. this news coming in from a coincidental meeting and a removed source halted my breath and left my eyes to wander from the unknowing bearer sitting across from me. this person who once said peekaboo walking into a bathroom where i once dressed, this person who once sang his little rendition of the righteous brothers to me where i snuggled into his arms in a big, big bed, this person who one all summer long dumped ice in my shirt and threw me into a pool over and over, this person whose friends smiled slightly to me before i knew it was done.. my memories of him come softly then harshly. it's too strange to imagine. it must've been murder. he had so much and a big, big heart. i loved him never owning him. it was his way.

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Fri 08/21/09 02:17 PM
it is the first time a lover has died on me. it was an entirely untimely death. this news coming in from a coincidental meeting and a removed source halted my breath and left my eyes to wander from the unknowing bearer sitting across from me. this person who once said peekaboo walking into a bathroom where i once dressed, this person who once sang his little rendition of the righteous brothers to me where i snuggled into his arms in a big, big bed, this person who one all summer long dumped ice in my shirt and threw me into a pool over and over, this person whose friends smiled slightly to me before i knew it was done.. my memories of him come softly then harshly. it's too strange to imagine. it must've been murder. he had so much and a big, big heart. i loved him never owning him. it was his way.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Fri 08/21/09 02:19 PM Edited by kc0003 on Fri 08/21/09 02:20 PM
katie.... words fall short when hearts land harshly... im sorry

trgirl Joined Tue 01/20/09 Posts: 2368	Fri 08/21/09 02:21 PM


Fusion99 Joined Thu 07/09/09 Posts: 927	Fri 08/21/09 02:23 PM
it is the first time a lover has died on me. it was an entirely untimely death. this news coming in from a coincidental meeting and a removed source halted my breath and left my eyes to wander from the unknowing bearer sitting across from me. this person who once said peekaboo walking into a bathroom where i once dressed, this person who once sang his little rendition of the righteous brothers to me where i snuggled into his arms in a big, big bed, this person who one all summer long dumped ice in my shirt and threw me into a pool over and over, this person whose friends smiled slightly to me before i knew it was done.. my memories of him come softly then harshly. it's too strange to imagine. it must've been murder. he had so much and a big, big heart. i loved him never owning him. it was his way. I don't mean to sound flippant, but I've never had this kind of loss. I always thought it was better to be alone in life, that way Id never be hurt. I see I was wrong from your write. There is good memories here with the bad and the pain. Thanks for sharing and opening up my eyes.

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Fri 08/21/09 02:26 PM
katie.... words fall short when hearts land harshly... im sorry thank you, Kevin, especially for still being here with me..

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Fri 08/21/09 02:27 PM
hello, trgirl

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Fri 08/21/09 02:28 PM
it is the first time a lover has died on me. it was an entirely untimely death. this news coming in from a coincidental meeting and a removed source halted my breath and left my eyes to wander from the unknowing bearer sitting across from me. this person who once said peekaboo walking into a bathroom where i once dressed, this person who once sang his little rendition of the righteous brothers to me where i snuggled into his arms in a big, big bed, this person who one all summer long dumped ice in my shirt and threw me into a pool over and over, this person whose friends smiled slightly to me before i knew it was done.. my memories of him come softly then harshly. it's too strange to imagine. it must've been murder. he had so much and a big, big heart. i loved him never owning him. it was his way. I don't mean to sound flippant, but I've never had this kind of loss. I always thought it was better to be alone in life, that way Id never be hurt. I see I was wrong from your write. There is good memories here with the bad and the pain. Thanks for sharing and opening up my eyes. i think maybe you can be 'alone' and still love. when you love, you are always full. thank you for sharing, fusion.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Fri 08/21/09 02:29 PM
katie.... words fall short when hearts land harshly... im sorry thank you, Kevin, especially for still being here with me.. you have always known where i stand...there is no need to thank me for that...

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Fri 08/21/09 03:51 PM
sorry for your lose

ak0 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2505	Fri 08/21/09 06:02 PM
sorry for your lose thank you ms. teddy. he had beautiful tattoos. he was so kind to me. we rapped about everything.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sat 08/22/09 06:20 AM
I'm sure this loss brings some memory when you least expect it...like little flashes of a home movie...what an honest sharing you've given us...

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Sat 08/22/09 06:34 AM