I'm on the outside,
Trying to get in,
You're on the inside,
Beconing again,

The walls are solid,
The climb too steep,
I keep on trying,
As I want to weep.

The is no drawbridge,
That you can let down,
So I stand here clawing,
Always hitting the ground.

There is no ladder,
To ease my climb,
There will be sorrow,
And it will be mine,

I ask you for help,
To get me inside,
But you tell me sorry,
By your heart you abide.

So I'll stand here waiting,
Ouside with my hope,
And pray that someday,
You'll drop me a rope.

AWESOME!!!!!

Ohhh that is sooooo good

That's how I feel!!!!!!


Tammy

thanks to both of you.

Very powerful and heartfelt...

...an aesthetic write

very nice

thanks all

very nicely written Griffin

Walls...
They are an unfortunate thing, but more common than one might think. I have often wondered about the Reasons for such Walls... Past hurts maybe? It is Sad that the one who came before me could inflict so much Damage... that you fear the intentions of the next one.
I am NOT the One before me...
There is no Need to keep me out, for my intent is not to hurt you...
Just Let down your Wall... and LET me have the opportunity to Love You.

Nicely said...

Nice, good job!

Thank You.
I, too, sometimes feel that I am having the same fight that it appears that you are having. {{{HUGGS}}} for you my friend.

I hope you get a rope as well then...

We only find "the one" precious few times in our lives... if we find them at all.
One day, when the time is right, and Goals have been met... Hopefully I will be thrown that rope... Until then I wait, and continue to give my Love.
I am Not those that came before me, and I know what I want.

another

WOW...full of emotion!

Big hugs to you!