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Topic: Your Wall
BL4766's photo
Sun 03/28/10 02:22 PM
very nice griff!flowerforyou

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Sun 03/28/10 02:24 PM

I'm on the outside,
Trying to get in,
You're on the inside,
Beconing again,

The walls are solid,
The climb too steep,
I keep on trying,
As I want to weep.

The is no drawbridge,
That you can let down,
So I stand here clawing,
Always hitting the ground.

There is no ladder,
To ease my climb,
There will be sorrow,
And it will be mine,

I ask you for help,
To get me inside,
But you tell me sorry,
By your heart you abide.

So I'll stand here waiting,
Ouside with my hope,
And pray that someday,
You'll drop me a rope.





Very sweet, i really enjoyed your poem flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Sun 03/28/10 02:26 PM


I'm on the outside,
Trying to get in,
You're on the inside,
Beconing again,

The walls are solid,
The climb too steep,
I keep on trying,
As I want to weep.

The is no drawbridge,
That you can let down,
So I stand here clawing,
Always hitting the ground.

There is no ladder,
To ease my climb,
There will be sorrow,
And it will be mine,

I ask you for help,
To get me inside,
But you tell me sorry,
By your heart you abide.

So I'll stand here waiting,
Ouside with my hope,
And pray that someday,
You'll drop me a rope.





Very sweet, i really enjoyed your poem flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou


thanks... I wrote it long ago...

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Sun 03/28/10 02:37 PM
I feel WE have tried climbing some walls together man..
Great heart as to wanting to help,,all who have built these walls
around them....COOL!!!!drinker

I always read the profiles of ones I reply to first,,and YOU sound very much like me in many ways,,pool,and TV,,and heart.
Of course,,YOU have a real life,,,lol,,,but I won't hold THAT against you,,,,Plus,,IF I lived in Vegas,,,I'd NEVER have any money.
laugh laugh laugh laugh Nice having ya here in poems man..

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