Topic: Wall Flower
Sharris's photo
Wed 08/19/09 10:20 PM
Edited by Sharris on Wed 08/19/09 10:33 PM
Wall Flower

I waited to answer you,
after all the others, for
I wanted you to notice me,
take note of the thoughts
that flow out of my depth.
Silly, Huh.
to be needed in such a way.
This need to be seen,
only as you can see,
this color of my soul.
For, I cannot stand completely,
stripped, naked in front of you..that way.
I waited after the others,
hoping you might,
ask me,
for this dance.

Raine Les 8/19/2009

writer_gurl's photo
Wed 08/19/09 10:48 PM
Aww, sounds like meflowerforyou

MirrorMirror's photo
Thu 08/20/09 10:15 AM

Wall Flower

I waited to answer you,
after all the others, for
I wanted you to notice me,
take note of the thoughts
that flow out of my depth.
Silly, Huh.
to be needed in such a way.
This need to be seen,
only as you can see,
this color of my soul.
For, I cannot stand completely,
stripped, naked in front of you..that way.
I waited after the others,
hoping you might,
ask me,
for this dance.

Raine Les 8/19/2009
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Thu 08/20/09 12:06 PM
A quiet soothing breeze
kisses the flowers of the meadow.

A lone man
humbly walks among the flowers.

Gently, reverently,
light fingers trace
the bloom, whose fragrance
is so subtle
yet strongly compelling.

He bends down,
grazing his cheek
against her petals
inhaling her essence.

He appreciates
the gift of her meadow home
and builds nearby, so as not
to disturb or change her.
His only desire -
to be as close as possible
as he dances with her through life.

Sharris's photo
Thu 08/20/09 12:17 PM

A quiet soothing breeze
kisses the flowers of the meadow.

A lone man
humbly walks among the flowers.

Gently, reverently,
light fingers trace
the bloom, whose fragrance
is so subtle
yet strongly compelling.

He bends down,
grazing his cheek
against her petals
inhaling her essence.

He appreciates
the gift of her meadow home
and builds nearby, so as not
to disturb or change her.
His only desire -
to be as close as possible
as he dances with her through life.

Were that she could vine
and bramble in his sight.
that her fragrance were enough
of vision more such light..

Differentkindofwench's photo
Thu 08/20/09 12:46 PM
Sometimes sight is NOT necessary. Let the feel be the draw. That breeze is a powerful ally lending sensory aid to many!