Topic: For Always
che_'s photo
Wed 08/19/09 11:38 AM
I am new here so I am not certain if this is how or where you post a poem.... I have read some beautiful things written by so many members, I just wanted to add something of mine...

I needed a friend,
On whom I can depend,
A pleasure to meet,
None could compete.

A tall handsome man,
Took my heart cause he can
Longing to talk,
Holds my hand while we walk

A smile on his lips,
That I yearn to kiss,
The blue of his eyes,
Will be my demise...

His hugs safe and warm,
This man has such charm...
My dreams he would make.
If his heart I could take...

For always.

ma_thompson's photo
Wed 08/19/09 11:41 AM
Nicely done!! flowers

che_'s photo
Wed 08/19/09 11:48 AM
thank you Ma! (smiles)

Fusion99's photo
Wed 08/19/09 11:58 AM

I am new here so I am not certain if this is how or where you post a poem.... I have read some beautiful things written by so many members, I just wanted to add something of mine...

I needed a friend,
On whom I can depend,
A pleasure to meet,
None could compete.

A tall handsome man,
Took my heart cause he can
Longing to talk,
Holds my hand while we walk

A smile on his lips,
That I yearn to kiss,
The blue of his eyes,
Will be my demise...

His hugs safe and warm,
This man has such charm...
My dreams he would make.
If his heart I could take...

For always.
Hey there! Welcome to the poetry forums!waving There are alot of cool people here (me being one of themrofl ) and with what you have written, I see that you will fit right in. As for the poem, very well done, leaves me hanging like hope oftne does.flowers

MzEm's photo
Wed 08/19/09 04:25 PM
very good write and welcome....

Gossipmpm's photo
Wed 08/19/09 04:29 PM
Nice


Welcome che



Tammy:heart:

kc0003's photo
Wed 08/19/09 05:32 PM
welcome...flowerforyou

che_'s photo
Thu 08/20/09 04:54 AM
Edited by che_ on Thu 08/20/09 04:56 AM
Thank you sincerely! You are all very kind it's really nice to meet y'all! Hugzzzz!!

che_'s photo
Thu 08/20/09 04:55 AM
Awww thanks... as for hope, where would we be without it!flowerforyou