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I am new here so I am not certain if this is how or where you post a poem.... I have read some beautiful things written by so many members, I just wanted to add something of mine...
I needed a friend, On whom I can depend, A pleasure to meet, None could compete. A tall handsome man, Took my heart cause he can Longing to talk, Holds my hand while we walk A smile on his lips, That I yearn to kiss, The blue of his eyes, Will be my demise... His hugs safe and warm, This man has such charm... My dreams he would make. If his heart I could take... For always. |
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Nicely done!!
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thank you Ma! (smiles)
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I am new here so I am not certain if this is how or where you post a poem.... I have read some beautiful things written by so many members, I just wanted to add something of mine... I needed a friend, On whom I can depend, A pleasure to meet, None could compete. A tall handsome man, Took my heart cause he can Longing to talk, Holds my hand while we walk A smile on his lips, That I yearn to kiss, The blue of his eyes, Will be my demise... His hugs safe and warm, This man has such charm... My dreams he would make. If his heart I could take... For always.  There are alot of cool people here (me being one of them ) and with what you have written, I see that you will fit right in. As for the poem, very well done, leaves me hanging like hope oftne does.
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very good write and welcome....
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Nice
Welcome che Tammy 
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welcome...
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Edited by
che_
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Thu 08/20/09 04:56 AM
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Thank you sincerely! You are all very kind it's really nice to meet y'all! Hugzzzz!!
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Awww thanks... as for hope, where would we be without it!
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