Topic: in Thought of a Thought
d4tc's photo
Sat 08/15/09 06:44 PM




the connection
of rejection
and deception
after accepting
the hating and
degrading
tired of the
waiting
ready for
escaping
reality
where none
feel me
only some
of what I
envision
they may
listen
c l o s e l y
real
c l o s e l y
sometimes
too close
so
i
back up
and stack up
my chips

grab
new pens
and pads

bare thoughts
I skinny dip

paddling a
pen over pad

as lathargic
is I
look deep
into nowhere

I take a
stab
and back up
wrapping up
this mess

of prosperiety
be it a poem
she murmurs
something

alone lonely
only I

I looked
closely

she smiled

said
come

c l o s e r

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Sat 08/15/09 06:45 PM
:smile: drinker

myanimalcracker's photo
Sat 08/15/09 07:24 PM
smitten (((J)))

Gossipmpm's photo
Sat 08/15/09 08:11 PM
:heart:

AngelLight's photo
Sun 08/16/09 06:29 AM
Nice Sweet (((J)))

"into nowhere" always seems to lead to somewhere drinker


pkh's photo
Sun 08/16/09 07:05 AM
flowerforyou :heart:

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Mon 08/17/09 07:48 AM
awesome write:smile:

MzEm's photo
Mon 08/17/09 01:01 PM
Diggin' this write. Well done.

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Tue 08/18/09 06:50 AM
smooched :heart: smooched :heart: drinker flowers

trgirl's photo
Tue 08/18/09 06:51 AM
flowerforyou