Topic: stay the course/copyrite
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Mon 08/10/09 03:46 PM
Life is clear in a moment of time,-I stared at whats around,-Everything is beautiful at that moment of time,-Its ok to look away you say?/-I take a breath and close my eyes,-Blackness overcomes my eyes and a vision of life appears in th dark,-Wanting and wishing what other men have,-Just be glad with what you have,-In the back of my mind this continues to repeat,-But life continues to pass me by,-Ripping and grabbing at what pieces i can,-Desperate times in life turn me into a savage beast,-As life is cruel and overbarring and i become weak,-Now it is life that is ripping and grabbing at my flesh-taking my life and leaving me in the dark to bleed until death,-I lay whimpering and crying-but no one hears nor cares for this soul filled with life,-A voice overcomes like a thunderest cloud,-Remember child you are not alone-dont give up,-Rise and stand and take your place in this illusion,-This is only temporary,-Obtain knowledge and you will have wisdom,-With understanding do not chase and desire what the demon has laid out for you in this world,-Walk with me and i will bless your life,-The voice faints away to silence to leave me with my thoughts,-I sit and dwell on this wisdom that i was shown,-Then with a burst of life i grab and pull myself from the depths of darkness,-The light then overcomes the dark as i pull myself out of the hole,-I open my eyes and everything is ok and nothing has changed,-I should'nt have looked away,-Keep my eyes on the path and the light will always stay.

4974's photo
Mon 08/10/09 03:50 PM
awesome!!!! you have a way with words...thank you

nikko1980's photo
Mon 08/10/09 09:18 PM
thank youbiggrin