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Cupid's arrow seems to be broken
Its aim is off on who it is poking He promised that loves truth was ahead Took out his weapon and aimed at my head I closed my eyes and giggled in glee Finally love was to happen to me Directions must have been misread It seems my dog was shot instead! Once she was pierced, her loyalties shifted Now onto the partner that cupid pre-gifted She used to run around with mutts Now with my man that b-i-t-c-h struts My baby's been shot And he cannot see His partner's a dog It's supposed to be me! Today he walked her down my street Her tail in the air She walked with conceit I screamed out the window As the two walked below "She's not what she seems, She's just a missed bow! I waited a lifetime for you to pursue She'll never love you the way that I do" There was no catching my sweetheart's ear Obsessed with my pet since shot by loves spear Though cupid's intentions did come from his heart He forgot to pre-test his component part Love's truth was promised and did lie ahead But my cage is empty and so is my bed |
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Wow... I can totally relate to that... I'm tired of seeing decent girls wind up with complete jerk/trash/losers that don't deserve them.
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nice write
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thanks
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i like this, just as i did last night
made me laugh again...funny write  
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cute write
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Edited by
brwnkimba
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Mon 08/10/09 12:49 PM
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Feeling this one all to well!!!
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Very cute write!
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Very cute write! 
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Funny and so true....
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Cupid's arrow seems to be broken Its aim is off on who it is poking He promised that loves truth was ahead Took out his weapon and aimed at my head I closed my eyes and giggled in glee Finally love was to happen to me Directions must have been misread It seems my dog was shot instead! Once she was pierced, her loyalties shifted Now onto the partner that cupid pre-gifted She used to run around with mutts Now with my man that b-i-t-c-h struts My baby's been shot And he cannot see His partner's a dog It's supposed to be me! Today he walked her down my street Her tail in the air She walked with conceit I screamed out the window As the two walked below "She's not what she seems, She's just a missed bow! I waited a lifetime for you to pursue She'll never love you the way that I do" There was no catching my sweetheart's ear Obsessed with my pet since shot by loves spear Though cupid's intentions did come from his heart He forgot to pre-test his component part Love's truth was promised and did lie ahead But my cage is empty and so is my bed Well, bless my boots. We have here a raw and ingenious talent. My dear, I believe you ARE, in fact, an honest to goodness poet. And a good one to boot. |
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Cupid's arrow seems to be broken Its aim is off on who it is poking He promised that loves truth was ahead Took out his weapon and aimed at my head I closed my eyes and giggled in glee Finally love was to happen to me Directions must have been misread It seems my dog was shot instead! Once she was pierced, her loyalties shifted Now onto the partner that cupid pre-gifted She used to run around with mutts Now with my man that b-i-t-c-h struts My baby's been shot And he cannot see His partner's a dog It's supposed to be me! Today he walked her down my street Her tail in the air She walked with conceit I screamed out the window As the two walked below "She's not what she seems, She's just a missed bow! I waited a lifetime for you to pursue She'll never love you the way that I do" There was no catching my sweetheart's ear Obsessed with my pet since shot by loves spear Though cupid's intentions did come from his heart He forgot to pre-test his component part Love's truth was promised and did lie ahead But my cage is empty and so is my bed Well, bless my boots. We have here a raw and ingenious talent. My dear, I believe you ARE, in fact, an honest to goodness poet. And a good one to boot.  Wow thank you
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Really great write. Funny and deep all at once |
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