Topic: REMEMBERING
Gossipmpm's photo
Wed 08/05/09 11:24 PM
As my city sleeps.....

I lay awake
Looking for answers

I watch the steam
Rise from the manhole
Covers

Reminding me
Of a life below me

I watch the night urchins
Run the avenue
Smuggling who knows what
To who knows where

Reminding me
Of life beside me

I look up
At the stars
I look up to god

Reminding me
There is always
A life

Above me




Tammy



Abracadabra's photo
Thu 08/06/09 01:21 AM

Here, I banjo-ized your poem.

http://users.csonline.net/designer/ideas/life.mp3

I screwed it up pretty bad though. I said, 'below' twice instead of 'beside' for the second stanza.

I also added a whole new stanza at the end. Sorry I couldn't resist. It just came out naturally.

Gossipmpm's photo
Thu 08/06/09 03:54 AM


Here, I banjo-ized your poem.

http://users.csonline.net/designer/ideas/life.mp3

I screwed it up pretty bad though. I said, 'below' twice instead of 'beside' for the second stanza.

I also added a whole new stanza at the end. Sorry I couldn't resist. It just came out naturally.

glasses


I loved it!!!
:heart:










kalunda's photo
Fri 08/07/09 10:35 AM
thank youlove

Gossipmpm's photo
Mon 08/10/09 05:30 PM

thank youlove




Your welcome!