Topic: let me know what you think about my profile?
malektaus's photo
Sat 08/01/09 09:05 AM
do i look dateble? or not?

and please just the women

writer_gurl's photo
Sat 08/01/09 09:07 AM
Of course you're datable, why not?:wink:

It just takes timeohwell

malektaus's photo
Sat 08/01/09 11:05 AM
i understand that but its that i really never had the experience so...where/how do begin? believe me im very new to this type of stuff..

IntelligentDesigner's photo
Sat 08/01/09 11:16 AM
Edited by IntelligentDesigner on Sat 08/01/09 11:21 AM
Well, you have some decent information and are very expressive on your views. That's good. I might suggest writing a bit more general information and working on your sentence structure and organization a little bit.

You also might wanna rephrase the ending a little bit. As for what you're looking for, it gives a sort demanding and exclusive impression of you.

Overall, yes, you look dateable. Everybody's dateable. You just have to do some searching yourself. And I see you have some posts down. Getting in the forums is a great start.

*edit

Oh yeah, and don't say you hate writing about yourself. You seem like an alright guy to me going by your religion and respect statements. Whoever wants to meet you is going to want to ask about you, but might change their mind if you give off the impression that you are reluctant to provide this information whether it be written or verbally.

malektaus's photo
Sat 08/01/09 08:27 PM
thanks i changed it alittle bit so if you wanna take another look cool!

and i took that off..plus if a woman asks me a question i'll answer it i'd rather be honest anyways..

no photo
Sat 08/01/09 09:04 PM
sure