Topic: Dichotomy of Her Goodbyes ` | |
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Usually it is an afterthought...goodbye... Goodbye, bye, see you later It is said in times of hurry Times of......eh? .....Going We use it everyday It has become sort of a Well wishing... But, There is something excruciating about the way she says goodbye She has a way of saying it That makes me hurt, Makes me wish I could freeze time And live in her eyes for eternity And, There is something alarming about the way she says goodbye Almost a warning..... As if, once exposed; All of the evil elements in the universe Might conspire to deny my return My journey, May well be interrupted by a Possessed breeze That passes through me And washes away any memory of her And I will be lost...forever Yet, There is something so magical about the way she says goodbye How she draws out the last of it ...G`byyyeeeeeeee... It nearly begs for a question mark Yes my sweet, yes Yes I’m leaving and yes, I’ll be back It sounds so, Endearing so, Laced with Desire and longing Her voice fluctuates My soul Chills My mind visualizes her In all the stages of her life From the woman in front of me All the way back To her childhood Back to this pretty little girl Standing at the end of a driveway Somewhere With little pink bows Holding her hair back I love the little girl in her The teenager The woman And I have come to both, Detest And love The way she says.... .............goodbye kc09 |
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Love it, love it, love it!!!!
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What Artgurl said...
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Love it, love it, love it!!!! thank you so very much |
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What Artgurl said... what i said to artgurl..... |
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very cool write
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nice write
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very cool write thank you |
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nice write thanks for dropping in.... |
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i can only imagine how 'hello' makes you feel! i soooo enjoyed that write!!
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i can only imagine how 'hello' makes you feel! i soooo enjoyed that write!! looks like i may have to explore that.... thank you for taking the time |
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i can only imagine how 'hello' makes you feel! i soooo enjoyed that write!! Dang I was going to say that! Beautiful {{{KC}}} |
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i can only imagine how 'hello' makes you feel! i soooo enjoyed that write!! Dang I was going to say that! Beautiful {{{KC}}} guess i have no choice then |
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i hate saying goodbye...
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Edited by
kc0003
on
Fri 07/24/09 09:03 PM
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i hate saying goodbye... this write pretty much says how i feel about it... |
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Oh my, how wonderful...there are too many people I have had to say goodbye to. I hate the part when it's over and you have to say goodbye....
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Oh my, how wonderful...there are too many people I have had to say goodbye to. I hate the part when it's over and you have to say goodbye.... thank you very much |
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Great job on this one~
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Great job on this one~ thank you my friend |
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"Goodbye"......... The beginning of a new journey? Love the write, thank you for sharing.
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