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Topic: Dichotomy of Her Goodbyes `
kc0003's photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:19 PM

Usually it is an afterthought...goodbye...

Goodbye, bye, see you later
It is said in times of hurry
Times of......eh?
.....Going

We use it everyday
It has become sort of a
Well wishing...

But,

There is something excruciating about the way she says goodbye

She has a way of saying it
That makes me hurt,
Makes me wish I could freeze time
And live in her eyes for eternity

And,

There is something alarming about the way she says goodbye

Almost a warning.....
As if, once exposed;
All of the evil elements in the universe
Might conspire to deny my return
My journey,
May well be interrupted by a
Possessed breeze
That passes through me
And washes away any memory of her
And I will be lost...forever

Yet,

There is something so magical about the way she says goodbye

How she draws out the last of it
...G`byyyeeeeeeee...
It nearly begs for a question mark

Yes my sweet, yes
Yes I’m leaving and yes,
I’ll be back

It sounds so,
Endearing so,
Laced with
Desire and longing
Her voice fluctuates
My soul
Chills
My mind visualizes her
In all the stages of her life
From the woman in front of me
All the way back
To her childhood

Back to this pretty little girl
Standing at the end of a driveway
Somewhere
With little pink bows
Holding her hair back

I love the little girl in her
The teenager
The woman

And I have come to both,
Detest
And love

The way she says....

.............goodbye



kc09

ArtGurl's photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:23 PM
Love it, love it, love it!!!! flowerforyou :heart:

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Fri 07/24/09 06:23 PM
What Artgurl said...flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:24 PM

Love it, love it, love it!!!! flowerforyou :heart:





thank you so very much


:heart: flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:25 PM

What Artgurl said...flowerforyou




what i said to artgurl.....laugh

flowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:27 PM
very cool writedrinker

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Fri 07/24/09 06:28 PM
nice write flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:30 PM

very cool writedrinker



thank you

flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:31 PM

nice write flowerforyou




thanks for dropping in....flowerforyou

bastet126's photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:32 PM
i can only imagine how 'hello' makes you feel! i soooo enjoyed that write!! flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:35 PM

i can only imagine how 'hello' makes you feel! i soooo enjoyed that write!! flowerforyou




looks like i may have to explore that....
thank you for taking the time

flowerforyou flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:43 PM

i can only imagine how 'hello' makes you feel! i soooo enjoyed that write!! flowerforyou


Dang I was going to say that! laugh

Beautiful {{{KC}}} drinker :smile:

kc0003's photo
Fri 07/24/09 06:53 PM


i can only imagine how 'hello' makes you feel! i soooo enjoyed that write!! flowerforyou


Dang I was going to say that! laugh

Beautiful {{{KC}}} drinker :smile:




laugh guess i have no choice then laugh

no photo
Fri 07/24/09 08:54 PM
i hate saying goodbye...

kc0003's photo
Fri 07/24/09 09:01 PM
Edited by kc0003 on Fri 07/24/09 09:03 PM

i hate saying goodbye...





this write pretty much says how i feel about it...

:heart: flowerforyou

MzEm's photo
Fri 07/24/09 09:50 PM
Oh my, how wonderful...there are too many people I have had to say goodbye to. I hate the part when it's over and you have to say goodbye....

kc0003's photo
Fri 07/24/09 10:02 PM

Oh my, how wonderful...there are too many people I have had to say goodbye to. I hate the part when it's over and you have to say goodbye....



thank you very much


flowerforyou

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Sat 07/25/09 11:21 AM
Great job on this one~

kc0003's photo
Sat 07/25/09 02:33 PM

Great job on this one~



thank you my friend drinker

BonnyMiss's photo
Sat 07/25/09 03:21 PM
"Goodbye"......... The beginning of a new journey? Love the write, thank you for sharing.flowerforyou

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