Topic: return to sender
mythicalman22's photo
Fri 07/17/09 12:16 AM
I know you are out there sad and confused
wondering why you had to lose
If you could hear me the things I would say
I think about you every night I lay
trying and trying to find a way
to hear your laughter one more day
the sound of smashing as you play
watching you sleep made my heart gay
to see you once more please I pray
untill then this is all I will say
in my brain your memory will forever remain engraved
I will keep you safe inside my heart
while my life falls apart
the pieces of you shall still remain
as a guiding light thru the truest pain
I am sorry I cant see you now in all you are
I envisioned you tall, cocky, funny and smart
You will allways be my little boy
my shroud of hope and my veil of joy
I only wish I could tell this to your face
so you could see daddy never lost faith



HasidicEnforcer's photo
Fri 07/17/09 12:24 AM
oh, honey.

that was one of the most beautiful poems I have ever had the honor of reading.

my heart is breaking for you.

I hope that you can find peace one day.

:cry: flowerforyou sad

mythicalman22's photo
Fri 07/17/09 09:20 PM
thank you, I have a little piece of peace everyday

mythicalman22's photo
Thu 07/23/09 12:16 PM
I guess that you people didnt get this one..

d4tc's photo
Thu 07/23/09 12:29 PM
Edited by d4tc on Thu 07/23/09 12:29 PM

I guess that you people didnt get this one..


I just read it. Great Write! drinker

HasidicEnforcer's photo
Thu 07/23/09 12:33 PM

I guess that you people didnt get this one..


I did and you know I did. I thought it was beautiful.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 07/23/09 12:54 PM
Beautiful write! flowerforyou

Lilypetal's photo
Thu 07/23/09 01:30 PM
brokenheart Lovely!

mythicalman22's photo
Thu 07/23/09 03:11 PM
thank you..It feels good to get this out

Tocheeky4U's photo
Wed 07/29/09 07:31 AM
that was so beautifuland being a mother it makes my heart hurt... you have a gift myth