Topic: galactus
mythicalman22's photo
Thu 07/16/09 11:42 PM
we march upon the tides of time
within the arch of our own mind
Oh the secrets which we reveal
delving deeper down this feel
lay seige upon the stars alight
show the world your unwavering might
take a stand and stand to fight
stand among those who stand for right
show light to those who stand for wrong
their flight shall sing a saviors song
and as you stand before me willing to die for what is right
do not forget the ones who gave there lives for this fight.

HasidicEnforcer's photo
Thu 07/16/09 11:49 PM
Holy SHYT! This one is EXCELLENT!


My favorite line:

stand among those who stand for right

mythicalman22's photo
Thu 07/16/09 11:50 PM
thanks, I liked that line too..

HasidicEnforcer's photo
Thu 07/16/09 11:51 PM
my other favorite was:

and as you stand before me willing to die for what is right

mythicalman22's photo
Fri 07/17/09 09:22 PM
I am glad it made you happy, hopefully someone will get some inspiration from it

Tocheeky4U's photo
Wed 07/29/09 07:55 AM
this one hiuts home my dad was a soldier and it made me think of him and all he went and faught for... I love how you write myth

no photo
Wed 07/29/09 07:57 AM
drinker flowers

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 07/29/09 05:13 PM
drinker Well wrote! flowerforyou