Topic: The Girl Behind The Eyes | |
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a pack of smokes... that’s all I was after until I was mesmerized by her eyes. it was like looking into a brochure for the perfect vacation but, these weren’t dark mysterious exotic eyes they were bright and blue the kind of blue the sky could emulate only on the rare occasion. the kind of blue one would imagine a baby dreaming of they were full of life yet, I wondered how much they knew of pain I wondered if they have ever known “real” love I marveled at their youth and was moved by the realization that being twice her age I am left to drive off and daydream of a time when I might have tried to know her... kc09 |
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wow!!! that brings back memories...ha! thank you my friend |
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Beautiful write the eyes tell many things.....
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Your beary welcome my friend.I was hoping that U would enjoy that one.As I was reading your awesome write I felt that song.Godspeed!Cy {{{}}}
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Edited by
kc0003
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Thu 07/16/09 07:35 PM
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thanks k
cy...i thought of that too then tried real hard to keep away from "any" thing that might sound similar to it... |
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Getting old is fun huh?
I get this completely not sure anyone else would have posted it Bravo. |
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you never know what SHE may find interesting
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you never know what SHE may find interesting i guess you're right... now i have to re-work the piece though thank you for stopping in |
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i took comfort in the the wisdom of his experience
strength in his sensible ways and pleasure that this man still chose me |
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i took comfort in the the wisdom of his experience strength in his sensible ways and pleasure that this man still chose me thanks for that...nicely done, why did you stop? |
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i took comfort in the the wisdom of his experience strength in his sensible ways and pleasure that this man still chose me thanks for that...nicely done, why did you stop? are you trying to say my post is insufficient or did you really just like hearing me speak? |
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i took comfort in the the wisdom of his experience strength in his sensible ways and pleasure that this man still chose me thanks for that...nicely done, why did you stop? are you trying to say my post is insufficient or did you really just like hearing me speak? no, i liked it...i am flattered that you took the time to post |
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each and every moment in each and every way
how we pick up on these moments every single day |
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a pack of smokes... that’s all I was after until I was mesmerized by her eyes. it was like looking into a brochure for the perfect vacation but, these weren’t dark mysterious exotic eyes they were bright and blue the kind of blue the sky could emulate only on the rare occasion. the kind of blue one would imagine a baby dreaming of they were full of life yet, I wondered how much they knew of pain I wondered if they have ever known “real” love I marveled at their youth and was moved by the realization that being twice her age I am left to drive off and daydream of a time when I might have tried to know her... kc09 You are always such a breath of freshness. Loved it... |
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each and every moment in each and every way how we pick up on these moments every single day thank you katie... |
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/quote] You are always such a breath of freshness. Loved it... you are too kind...thank you |
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Really nice kc...you pull the reader in
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