Topic: as I watch you walk away..
greeneyedlady42's photo
Thu 05/17/07 06:52 PM
No words can describe what Im feeling right now
I want to tell you something, but I don’t know just how
You are the air I breathe you’re everything to me
This day just cant happen cuz without you I cannot be
Youre the salt on the margarita glass, my very flavor
You’re the kiss on my lips at night, every moment I savor
The song I hear on the radio, Its you singing every note
You’re the one I long for, the one who keeps me a float
How can I watch you walk away, you’re the beating in my heart
I will surely disintegrate, my friends see me fall apart
You’re my pookie my one desire, without you I will melt
You taught me everything of love, awakened everything I’ve felt.
If you ever loved me, Give me a moment to give up this fight
Let me take you in one more time, before you leave my sight.
Im shaking and Im so afraid, I know your running scared
Turn and walk away from me, pretend you never cared.
I’ve never asked a thing from you, I take you as you are
But I ask myself every day- If I can survive life with this scar.
One day you may decide, you made this huge mistake
I will have to think real hard, If my heart can stand another break.
I may turn away from you, to protect whats left inside
I may have to run next time, it has nothing to do with pride.
It would be protection, as I heal whats left of me now
Knowing I cant survive- another rejection somehow
So don’t be amazed at how I let go, don’t praise me for strength
Because to be free from this pain, I’d go to almost any length.

Trizar's photo
Thu 05/17/07 06:57 PM
wow, you are a romantic, like myself... great poem

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 05/17/07 07:04 PM
greeneyed= wow I have felt just like that!

That was really good... flowerforyou

KAY KAY 's photo
Thu 05/17/07 07:13 PM
I guess that I would have to follow suite and say.....WOW

Gryphyn's photo
Fri 05/18/07 07:45 AM
Once again My Lady, you have shown what it is to be human. With flare
someday we will all find our dreams and not hurt anymore.

flowerforyou

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TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 05/18/07 10:06 AM
Awesome girl but then they always are glad to see you writing
againbigsmile flowerforyou

karmafury's photo
Fri 05/18/07 12:01 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

Great read. Well written GEL.

no photo
Fri 05/18/07 02:57 PM
nice!

LAMom's photo
Fri 05/18/07 05:24 PM
(((( gel )))))
flowerforyou Awesome

lazyj321's photo
Fri 05/18/07 05:25 PM
nice..

wonderman37's photo
Fri 05/18/07 05:34 PM
powerful, I felt that way once a lifetine ago