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Topic: ..a simple poetic attempt
tombraider Joined Wed 09/12/07 Posts: 5042	Sat 06/20/09 09:58 PM
..one day i saw a flower growing by itself so i gently picked it set it on a shelf ..i fertilized (lol) and watered it made sure it had sunshine and from afar admired it ..my flower so divine ..i awoke one day and found it gone the flower i adored ..the pot from which it grew laid shattered on the floor.. .. i swept away the dirt and clay ..and began to realize.. that the beauty of my flower ..was only in my eyes... writings from the tombs...

WolfEyez Joined Sun 05/03/09 Posts: 1780	Sat 06/20/09 10:04 PM
I really like that. very nice

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Sat 06/20/09 10:13 PM
nicely written..

tombraider Joined Wed 09/12/07 Posts: 5042	Sat 06/20/09 11:02 PM
...thank you... ....one for each...

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Sun 06/21/09 04:53 AM


AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sun 06/21/09 06:32 AM
..one day i saw a flower growing by itself so i gently picked it set it on a shelf ..i fertilized (lol) and watered it made sure it had sunshine and from afar admired it ..my flower so divine ..i awoke one day and found it gone the flower i adored ..the pot from which it grew laid shattered on the floor.. .. i swept away the dirt and clay ..and began to realize.. that the beauty of my flower ..was only in my eyes... writings from the tombs... We can never own or possess nature, a person or anything. Your write is really good, and speaks to this ultimate truth I think

tombraider Joined Wed 09/12/07 Posts: 5042	Sun 06/21/09 10:22 AM
... ..thank you..

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 06/22/09 10:38 AM


Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Tue 06/23/09 09:17 AM
Yeyyyyy, love it when you send up a poem or two..........

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 06/23/09 09:19 AM


RCraigVaught Joined Sat 06/20/09 Posts: 40	Tue 06/23/09 03:07 PM
I'm speechless... Beautiful

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Tue 06/23/09 03:33 PM
I am always in wonder when I come upon writings in similar and kind to those of my own, of others, our hearts are so entwined and inclined. Such simple truths, depth..thank you.

tombraider Joined Wed 09/12/07 Posts: 5042	Tue 06/23/09 08:01 PM
...thank you ...

Lilypetal Joined Wed 02/25/09 Posts: 4052	Tue 06/23/09 08:05 PM
Lovely!

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Tue 06/23/09 08:47 PM Edited by Noden on Tue 06/23/09 08:48 PM
A simple missing the tomb... so clever, such a delightful thought to bring to live in the mind...

tombraider Joined Wed 09/12/07 Posts: 5042	Wed 06/24/09 10:50 AM
...wow..this is like the most responses i've received in quite some time...the tombs is truly touched..<--- ..o.k enuf of that crap... .............again thank you ...

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 06/24/09 10:55 AM
nicely stated

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Wed 06/24/09 11:06 AM
...wow..this is like the most responses i've received in quite some time...the tombs is truly touched..<--- ..o.k enuf of that crap... .............again thank you ...

tombraider Joined Wed 09/12/07 Posts: 5042	Wed 06/24/09 11:15 AM
....yall r 2 kind... ... .

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 06/25/09 07:52 AM
..one day i saw a flower growing by itself so i gently picked it set it on a shelf ..i fertilized (lol) and watered it made sure it had sunshine and from afar admired it ..my flower so divine ..i awoke one day and found it gone the flower i adored ..the pot from which it grew laid shattered on the floor.. .. i swept away the dirt and clay ..and began to realize.. that the beauty of my flower ..was only in my eyes... writings from the tombs... Good write (((tomb))) Welcome back, have missed your writes .