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Topic: Whispers of You
MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 06/23/09 06:50 AM
Whispers of you in the morning light Take me back to a summer night Tangled in sheets, our bodies entwined Ebb and flow in a jagged line Whispers of you in the midst of my day Tauntingly ask me to come and play The vision again, of our bodies embraced I follow the scene with a slow moving trace Whispers of you, as I lay down to cry Watching Whispers of you as they pass me by Falling deep into slumber in the evening mist Smile on my face, whispering a kiss To Kevin 6-17-09 Thank you Mirror

ASK69 Joined Sat 02/07/09 Posts: 1923	Tue 06/23/09 06:53 AM
Whispers of you in the morning light Take me back to a summer night Tangled in sheets, our bodies entwined Ebb and flow in a jagged line Whispers of you in the midst of my day Tauntingly ask me to come and play The vision again, of our bodies embraced I follow the scene with a slow moving trace Whispers of you, as I lay down to cry Watching Whispers of you as they pass me by Falling deep into slumber in the evening mist Smile on my face, whispering a kiss To Kevin 6-17-09 Excellent Kim!!!!! That was very soothing and the rhyming was very good too. This is what i call sheer talent and originality. Keep it up. And Best Wishes.

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 06/23/09 07:07 AM
Whispers of you in the morning light Take me back to a summer night Tangled in sheets, our bodies entwined Ebb and flow in a jagged line Whispers of you in the midst of my day Tauntingly ask me to come and play The vision again, of our bodies embraced I follow the scene with a slow moving trace Whispers of you, as I lay down to cry Watching Whispers of you as they pass me by Falling deep into slumber in the evening mist Smile on my face, whispering a kiss To Kevin 6-17-09 Excellent Kim!!!!! That was very soothing and the rhyming was very good too. This is what i call sheer talent and originality. Keep it up. And Best Wishes. Thank you so much for the kind words

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Tue 06/23/09 08:02 AM
That was very beautiful MisKim thank you for shareing

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 06/23/09 08:03 AM
That was very beautiful MisKim thank you for shareing Thank you Sweetie

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Tue 06/23/09 08:10 AM
That was very beautiful MisKim thank you for shareing Thank you Sweetie Your welcome hey i call them the way i see them ......BTW i like that pic you have up it reminds me of my first love

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 06/23/09 08:18 AM
That was very beautiful MisKim thank you for shareing Thank you Sweetie Your welcome hey i call them the way i see them ......BTW i like that pic you have up it reminds me of my first love Thank you....it reminds me of my new love...amazing when you realize what LOVE really is

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Tue 06/23/09 10:42 AM
Whispers of you in the morning light Take me back to a summer night Tangled in sheets, our bodies entwined Ebb and flow in a jagged line Whispers of you in the midst of my day Tauntingly ask me to come and play The vision again, of our bodies embraced I follow the scene with a slow moving trace Whispers of you, as I lay down to cry Watching Whispers of you as they pass me by Falling deep into slumber in the evening mist Smile on my face, whispering a kiss To Kevin 6-17-09 Great poem, a lot of feeling to one you care for.. wish you the best

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 06/23/09 12:29 PM
Whispers of you in the morning light Take me back to a summer night Tangled in sheets, our bodies entwined Ebb and flow in a jagged line Whispers of you in the midst of my day Tauntingly ask me to come and play The vision again, of our bodies embraced I follow the scene with a slow moving trace Whispers of you, as I lay down to cry Watching Whispers of you as they pass me by Falling deep into slumber in the evening mist Smile on my face, whispering a kiss To Kevin 6-17-09 Great poem, a lot of feeling to one you care for.. wish you the best Thank you Daniel...haven't seen you around...glad to hear from you again

HeyBeautiful88 Joined Wed 06/17/09 Posts: 1056	Tue 06/23/09 12:34 PM
Very Nice Lady! Ahhh New Love... is there anything like it? It kind of engulfs you...

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 06/23/09 04:56 PM
Very Nice Lady! Ahhh New Love... is there anything like it? It kind of engulfs you... Thank you so much...yes...new love, nothing like it in the world

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Tue 06/23/09 05:32 PM
so very nice Kim and what a wonderful flow and message

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 06/23/09 05:35 PM
so very nice Kim and what a wonderful flow and message awwwwwwww....you are always so sweet to me....thank you

vivian2981 Joined Thu 04/16/09 Posts: 37289	Tue 06/23/09 05:58 PM
Whispers of you in the morning light Take me back to a summer night Tangled in sheets, our bodies entwined Ebb and flow in a jagged line Whispers of you in the midst of my day Tauntingly ask me to come and play The vision again, of our bodies embraced I follow the scene with a slow moving trace Whispers of you, as I lay down to cry Watching Whispers of you as they pass me by Falling deep into slumber in the evening mist Smile on my face, whispering a kiss To Kevin 6-17-09 Thank you Mirror

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Tue 06/23/09 06:42 PM
Whispers of you in the morning light Take me back to a summer night Tangled in sheets, our bodies entwined Ebb and flow in a jagged line Whispers of you in the midst of my day Tauntingly ask me to come and play The vision again, of our bodies embraced I follow the scene with a slow moving trace Whispers of you, as I lay down to cry Watching Whispers of you as they pass me by Falling deep into slumber in the evening mist Smile on my face, whispering a kiss To Kevin 6-17-09 Thank you Mirror Thank you

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 06/25/09 10:44 AM
Whispers of you in the morning light Take me back to a summer night Tangled in sheets, our bodies entwined Ebb and flow in a jagged line Whispers of you in the midst of my day Tauntingly ask me to come and play The vision again, of our bodies embraced I follow the scene with a slow moving trace Whispers of you, as I lay down to cry Watching Whispers of you as they pass me by Falling deep into slumber in the evening mist Smile on my face, whispering a kiss To Kevin 6-17-09 Great poem, a lot of feeling to one you care for.. wish you the best Thank you Daniel...haven't seen you around...glad to hear from you again You are most welcome, yeah, still around, just not much, been really busy, lots of testing.. luv ya sis

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Thu 06/25/09 12:14 PM
Whispers of you in the morning light Take me back to a summer night Tangled in sheets, our bodies entwined Ebb and flow in a jagged line Whispers of you in the midst of my day Tauntingly ask me to come and play The vision again, of our bodies embraced I follow the scene with a slow moving trace Whispers of you, as I lay down to cry Watching Whispers of you as they pass me by Falling deep into slumber in the evening mist Smile on my face, whispering a kiss To Kevin 6-17-09 Great poem, a lot of feeling to one you care for.. wish you the best Thank you Daniel...haven't seen you around...glad to hear from you again You are most welcome, yeah, still around, just not much, been really busy, lots of testing.. luv ya sis Well, don't be a stranger

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Mon 06/29/09 07:59 AM
Whispers of you in the morning light Take me back to a summer night Tangled in sheets, our bodies entwined Ebb and flow in a jagged line Whispers of you in the midst of my day Tauntingly ask me to come and play The vision again, of our bodies embraced I follow the scene with a slow moving trace Whispers of you, as I lay down to cry Watching Whispers of you as they pass me by Falling deep into slumber in the evening mist Smile on my face, whispering a kiss To Kevin 6-17-09 Great poem, a lot of feeling to one you care for.. wish you the best Thank you Daniel...haven't seen you around...glad to hear from you again You are most welcome, yeah, still around, just not much, been really busy, lots of testing.. luv ya sis Well, don't be a stranger I'll try not to be, working on another black bet in another style, lots of work, and trainning students in my previous style, plus studying for my masters in electrical.. man didn't know the human mind could do so much.. lol, big hugs.. your little big brother Daniel

MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Mon 06/29/09 10:14 AM
Whispers of you in the morning light Take me back to a summer night Tangled in sheets, our bodies entwined Ebb and flow in a jagged line Whispers of you in the midst of my day Tauntingly ask me to come and play The vision again, of our bodies embraced I follow the scene with a slow moving trace Whispers of you, as I lay down to cry Watching Whispers of you as they pass me by Falling deep into slumber in the evening mist Smile on my face, whispering a kiss To Kevin 6-17-09 Great poem, a lot of feeling to one you care for.. wish you the best Thank you Daniel...haven't seen you around...glad to hear from you again You are most welcome, yeah, still around, just not much, been really busy, lots of testing.. luv ya sis Well, don't be a stranger I'll try not to be, working on another black bet in another style, lots of work, and trainning students in my previous style, plus studying for my masters in electrical.. man didn't know the human mind could do so much.. lol, big hugs.. your little big brother Daniel Hugs right back Daniel...sounds like you are making a lot of things happen...good for you.