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please stop by and rate my profile so i can make it better if it needs to be better.
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did we rate the last one?
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Mesmerizing
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yeah but i deleted the other one
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too many hats,woman will think you're bald
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too many hats,woman will think you're bald and whats wrong wiv bald? 
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too many hats,woman will think you're bald and whats wrong wiv bald?
Bald is sexy 
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exactly
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I found it hard to read. Every word starts with a capitol letter... and much is misspelled. Run that sucker through spell check and fix the capitolization stuff, and go from there. Good luck.
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yep, i agree with lilith ~ and good luck to you!
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I found it hard to read. Every word starts with a capitol letter... and much is misspelled. Run that sucker through spell check and fix the capitolization stuff, and go from there. Good luck. That was suggested to him in another thread.....he says it's cute to misspell words. |
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It's the 6th best profile in the history of profiles.
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It's all about you - I do this, I do that. What about talking about what's in it for a girl to date you - something like... I want a girlfriend who I can treat like a princess. Marketing is all about the benefits, not the features.
I agree with Eileenna, sloppy spelling makes you look stupid - it's not cute! And, all those pics are too many. Pick the 3-4 best and then wait for somone to ask you for more. You look lonely and desperate. That's never attractive. |
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Ok i took off all but four picturesand re wrote my profile i hope everything is spelled correctly if not please tell me the words that i miss spelled
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Ok, you're spelling, grammar and punctuation need a LOT of work, for many women, that many mistakes show a basic lack of respect, not only for your readers but yourself. You also come off as kind of "door-mat" like. You don't really say much about who you are as a person, you might want to fix that. I think the biggest problem is that you are practically inviting some woman to come walk all over you. But, hey, if that's your thing, go with it.
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so what i have on my profile is wrong
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Sigh.
Here are basic corrections, at least. My name is Scott and I'm 20 years old. I am a very relaxed and laid back person. I can be serious when the time comes. I have been a electrician as well as a cook at a bar. I like to just hang out and do things around the house and I like watch movies on rainy days on the couch. I do like to sing and cook; two of my favorite things. Ii also like to fish and keep things really simple. I can do impersonations of kermit the frog and a few others... I'm looking for a woman who I can treat like a queen every day, open her doors, take care of her when she's sick, and stand beside her throughout anything. I work really hard at doing the things I enjoy. I'm really hoping to meet the woman that wants this kind of treatment all the time and will be the same towards me. I like to give full body rubs and show my girl how special she is to me. The last two sentences were just deleted. |
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before you change all those spelling and grammar things
think about it do you want some one that makes that so important that they will not associate with you what other things may they feel are so important that really do not change who you really are just a thought but hey what do i know 
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Not much about the way women view profiles and first impressions, it would seem.
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Not much about the way women view profiles and first impressions, it would seem.
could be but myself i feel if a lil grammar is enough to keep them away then so be it because more than likely they will be a bit picky about every thing else as well and i do not need to be harped on about things that really do not matter
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